You know, I like this microfiction idea. Fanfic I can find time to read.

This was a sweet and poignant little snapshot of life after Lois, smileyd. I especially liked the language you used in the first paragraph. Very emotive. You did an excellent job of capturing Clark's point of view and feelings in a small amount of words.

Nicely done!

LabRat

Beautiful vignette. For such a short story it carried a large emotional wallop. Well written and well done.

Thank you both!