FDK: Deja Vu- Part 1- 15 - 09/14/03 06:54 PM
Hi Jaxie,
Great story!
More soon, please.
MAF
Great story!
More soon, please.
MAF
Re: FDK: Deja Vu- Part 1- 15 - 09/15/03 12:16 AM
Wow, 15 parts all at once!
I really enjoyed this, and look forward to your next fic!
I really enjoyed this, and look forward to your next fic!
Re: FDK: Deja Vu- Part 1- 15 - 09/15/03 04:15 AM
Hey Jaxie, good work! I enjoyed this one 
Jimmy was very cute 
and Supergirl had a good debut.
Some of your story parts were a little short... next story, you could post in longer sections. Though if you're posting all the parts at once, it's not that big a deal.
Welcome to the boards! Hope you have fun here
PJ
Jimmy was very cute and Supergirl had a good debut.Some of your story parts were a little short... next story, you could post in longer sections. Though if you're posting all the parts at once, it's not that big a deal.
Welcome to the boards! Hope you have fun here
PJ
Re: FDK: Deja Vu- Part 1- 15 - 09/19/03 05:06 AM
Finally getting a few minutes to catch up on these.
I enjoyed this little adventure.
You started off with an excellent hook, which immediately made me curious to read more.
For someone like me, who's not as interested in the mythology and characters of the Superman universe, this was still a very interesting and enjoyable story. Nice use of the movie villains! I always found them the most interesting and the second movie the most enjoyable, so it was fun to see them out and about again, creating havoc. <g>
Eeep - you had me worried for poor Jimmy there for a time! I thought maybe you were going to make Tank's day. (You might have figured by now that Jimmy isn't his favourite character)
Poor Jimmy.
And a sweet little ending, too. This was a fun reworking of some familiar characters, Jaxie.
LabRat
I enjoyed this little adventure.
You started off with an excellent hook, which immediately made me curious to read more.
For someone like me, who's not as interested in the mythology and characters of the Superman universe, this was still a very interesting and enjoyable story. Nice use of the movie villains! I always found them the most interesting and the second movie the most enjoyable, so it was fun to see them out and about again, creating havoc. <g>
Eeep - you had me worried for poor Jimmy there for a time! I thought maybe you were going to make Tank's day. (You might have figured by now that Jimmy isn't his favourite character)
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“Don’t you have some film to develop?” Clark asked.
Poor Jimmy.And a sweet little ending, too. This was a fun reworking of some familiar characters, Jaxie.
LabRat
Re: FDK: Deja Vu- Part 1- 15 - 09/19/03 08:12 AM
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Eeep - you had me worried for poor Jimmy there for a time! I thought maybe you were going to make Tank's day. (You might have figured by now that Jimmy isn't his favourite character)
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And a sweet little ending, too. This was a fun reworking of some familiar characters, Jaxie.
Jaxie