FDK: Number 14 - 10/03/07 12:51 PM
Re: FDK: Number 14 - 10/03/07 05:15 PM
Hah! I love it. Lois Lane is one smart cookie. Yes, H.G. Wells may have found and destroyed all the thirteen notes hidden around Lois's desk, but he didn't get the one she'd hidden on her person! Number "fourteen", indeed! I love the title. 
And the world didn't collapse! And Lois didn't marry Scardino! She didn't even get furious at Clark! In fact, she remembered that she loves Clark!
Maybe H.G. Wells disappeared? Bye-bye, H.G.!
Hah! What a delightful revelation story, Beth! (Of course, like CheeseoftheMonth - welcome to the boards! - suggested, another sequel would be fun. I can just imagine Clark playing dumb on the roof...
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Ann
And the world didn't collapse! And Lois didn't marry Scardino! She didn't even get furious at Clark! In fact, she remembered that she loves Clark!
Maybe H.G. Wells disappeared? Bye-bye, H.G.!
Hah! What a delightful revelation story, Beth! (Of course, like CheeseoftheMonth - welcome to the boards! - suggested, another sequel would be fun. I can just imagine Clark playing dumb on the roof...
)Ann
Re: FDK: Number 14 - 10/03/07 07:24 PM
Loved this! Poor Clark. For all his superpowers, he's always a step or twelve behind Lois!
Re: FDK: Number 14 - 10/04/07 01:40 AM
Hi,
Read the whole story, which I enjoyed very much, but I have to say I was a little disappointed that we were back to square one at the end... but this is what I call an ending!
Loved it.
Yours Jenni
Read the whole story, which I enjoyed very much, but I have to say I was a little disappointed that we were back to square one at the end... but this is what I call an ending!
Loved it.
Yours Jenni
Re: FDK: Number 14 - 10/04/07 02:49 PM
I'm glad you guys liked my little addition. I really liked your suggestion for a title CheeseoftheMonth, but it actually took me a long time to figure out what you meant when you wrote it. I kept thinking about that Jim Carey movie Number 23, and for some reason I didn't connect it to what I had written in my story. Anyway, once I got my brain in gear, I really liked that idea for a title, so I had to use it.
But now you've got me curious...
Regular you...? (insert graemlin with curious looking eyebrow raised)
And Ann...
It does make sense that Lois would stick the note in her pocket and make sure that she would always have it doesn't it?
You're the best!
But now you've got me curious...
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Maybe it's the new secret identity. No-one ever listens to regular me.
And Ann...
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H.G. Wells may have found and destroyed all the thirteen notes hidden around Lois's desk, but he didn't get the one she'd hidden on her person!
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Poor Clark. For all his superpowers, he's always a step or twelve behind Lois!
You're the best!
Re: FDK: Number 14 - 10/04/07 02:53 PM
This was a *first* story? Ohhh boy! I see great things ahead for you. Of course, now that we know you can write, you will be hounded mercilessly for more!
Nan
Nan
Re: FDK: Number 14 - 10/04/07 03:17 PM
Ah, yes, Beth. Regular me is... er, someone else. I'm not telling who though. Feel free to guess - you've only got about 4000 options.
I just felt like getting a new profile. Suffice it to say, I'm not new to the boards, and I do usually post under my other name. I like having a secret identity though.
Or maybe that should read multiple personalities? Someone call the men in white coats please!
Ok, so really I just have way too much time on my hands.
I'm not telling who though. Feel free to guess - you've only got about 4000 options. I just felt like getting a new profile. Suffice it to say, I'm not new to the boards, and I do usually post under my other name. I like having a secret identity though.
Or maybe that should read multiple personalities? Someone call the men in white coats please!
Ok, so really I just have way too much time on my hands.
Re: FDK: Number 14 - 10/04/07 07:02 PM
Adorable revelation. Hope there is more. Laura