Woo hoo! This day just keeps getting better! Two birthday stories for me! Hey, two Jack stories, no less! How well you both know me! Thank you, Saskia! This is a wonderful story! I always wanted to see more of Jack after Luthor accused him. I wondered what his thought process was. You've shown waht it was so well! That was a great idea!
Poor Jack! I really feel for him here. He finally has gotten his life going in a positive direction and Luthor is ripping it all away from him.

hee hee! I love this for all the negative things said about Luthor. I couldn't have said it better myself!

It was funny because as soon as he thought about taking a lie detector test, I thought that would be perfect. Then he realized that wouldn't be a good idea and I thought, "Oh, yeah!"

Yay, Jack. That is another thing I love about him, he doesn't lay down and take whatever comes his way. He has a lot of fight in him. The only way he's managed this long, I guess.

What a great story, Sas! I love introspection and I love Jack, so this was perfect! Thank you for the great birthday present!!

Jana (who is happy that her birthday can call attention to a wonderfully deserving, but underappreciated character)

P.S. Thanks again to Anna and Saskia and to everyone who helped by acting as a BR or anything else. I'm honored and, quite frankly, tickled pink to have two stories about Jack written for me.

So Jana I take it you like Jack then? Happy Birthday by the way. Laura

Hi, Saskia,

Basically, everything Jana just said!

I liked how you show what Jack was thinking. Poor Jack, always getting the short end of the stick, yet determined not to give up. Always resourceful, always thinking on his feet.

I also liked how well you wrote this, to seamlessly fit in with what we saw on the show. Very well done!

- Vicki

Great stuff, Saskia. It's always nice, now and then, to read something with a perspective from a minor character and Jack was always a lot of fun.



Oh and Jana:

Nice story, Saskia, about a character that doesn't get much mention in most fanfics. It's nice to see what Jack thinks when he's in prison.

I like that he worked out Luthor's involvement in the bombing of the Planet and that the new boy in Juvey (sp?) is there to get him.

Hope to see more from you.

Saskia

A great story!

Tricia

Saskia,
nice job - good story

Happy Birthday Jana
merry

Saskia, Groot krunststuk!! )

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hi,

Nice story.

Thank you all for your feedback! You really made me blush. I'm thrilled you all like it. I've had some problems with Jack's characters, so it's good to see I managed to get it right. After all, he is a sweet boy.

YAY! You liked it, Jana. I'm so happy you do! Hope you had a great birthday too.

Thank you! I'm having trouble to see this as a big piece of art or a wonderful vignette, but if you say so... Who's been learning you Dutch anyway? They forgot to tell you it's 'kunststuk' without the r.

Thank you!!! You really made my day, Sara.

And there's this:

I'll see what I can do about that. I'm busy with my internship, so I don't have much time (basically none at all) to write fic. But there's this idea in my head that keeps returning, no matter how many times I'm telling it to come back in half year. So who knows...

Thanks again Jana, Laura, Vicki, Rat, Roger, Tricia, Merry, S, Sara and Maria!

Saskia