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Posted By: ShayneT Comments: Strong 24 - 07/24/07 08:40 PM
Well, what do you think?
Posted By: TOC Re: Comments: Strong 24 - 07/25/07 12:52 AM
Only some short FDK here, Shayne, sorry. But that was a very good talk between Lois and Faith about pain and guilt and learning your lesson from it. Maybe these aren't the best lines to quote, but I loved them:

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Buffy stepped carefully around a spot of oil on the ground, being careful not to dirty her Manolo Blahnik shoes.

“What are you guys talking about?” she asked.

“Girl stuff,” Faith said.

“I'm not a girl?” Buffy's voice was a little testy.

Faith shrugged. “You're the boss.”

“Your boyfriend is awake.” Buffy said.
Yeah, well... you can't talk to your boss as if she was one of the girls. wink

But Shayne, this is horrible:

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“There's some kind of compulsion on him. All they have to do is call for him, and he'll come.”
The vampires can control Clark!!!! eek shock

You have to save him, Shayne! Better yet - let Lois save him!

Ann
Posted By: Angie Re: Comments: Strong 24 - 07/26/07 09:24 AM
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“So what do we know?” Buffy spoke from behind Lois, and her voice was curt.

“There’s some kind of compulsion on him. All they have to do is call for him, and he’ll come.”

Lois closed her eyes for a moment. She should have protected him.

At least this guilt was going to make her smarter. She was going to do better. She was going to save him.

And then she’d save herself.
I love the way you tie all the pieces together at the end of this chapter. It is so perfect for Lois to want to save Clark first and then herself--even in this alt-universe. smile
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