Well, what did you think?

I like it a lot, Shayne. I especially liked the conversation between Lois and Clark; I like how Lois doesn't want him to look at her differently.

I think that the (demon?) creature at the end of the part sounds friendly. Am I right? Some of them were friendly in Buffy... Maybe L&C will be able to talk to this creature without it trying to attack them.

~Anna.

Like Anna said, this is lovely, Shayne. And this, too:

I just hope that Lois will learn to trust Clark completely, and know that he won't censure her for what happened in the Congo. Because indeed, she needs to talk about what happened. And if she wants to get back to what she was, or at least learn to stay fully in control of her demon, she is going to need help. (Says I, the Buffy-illiterate. :rolleyes: )

I love that he touches her, and that she loves it so much that she closes her eyes to soak up the feeling of it.

I liked how Lois and Clark went demon-hunting after that. And like Anna, I wonder if the demon they found in the end of this part will prove to be friendly.

I'm very glad you are updating this so frequently, Shayne!

Ann

Still *shivering*... Why does it have to stop here?

Anyway, I can't wait to read more. This tale is really intriguing (- not to mention great in each and every aspect).

I have an idea I know what they've found which ought to give them another view of the supernatural.

I've been thinking of this as primarily the Buffyverse changing the Lois and Clark universe, but of course the opposite is also true. What effect will the knowledge that Clark exists have on the Buffyverse characters? In particular, will the whole mess we saw in Angel S5 happen? Looking forward to more with great interest.

superb.. looking fwd to meet the "creature"