Wow, this is getting very interesting.
If someone knew what Clark does about Luthor and Superman and didn't tell me when I was thinking of marrying the bum (Luthor I mean), I'd be VERY
More soon please!
Missy, great instalment.
I love it when someone is able to present a little logic into the HoL scenario, since it was so lacking in it in the series.
Lois is an intelligent woman and I was never able to get past the fact that she would reject her best friend because she didn't love him 'that way' but would consider (and accept) Lex's marriage proposal when it was obvious, even to her, that she didn't love him 'that way' either. Not a good choice.
Normally I'm all for whams of any kind, but in this instance I'd really like Lois and Clark to be able to work through the upcoming revelation quickly and in a logically reasonable manner. Better to have them together and focused on who the real villian is... Luthor.
The whams can come from Luthor's actions once Lois turns him down. Those are more fun anyway.
Post again... now, if not sooner.
Tank (who, since he can't really write anymore needs more story parts to read)
(Err, first off, apologies for not getting back to fdk on part 10 as promised, or on part 11 at all. I plead a bad case of real-life-itis.
Aaargh! Come on, Missy, the suspense is killing me!
Nan