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Posted By: mervoparkite FDK: Heaven 2/3 - 06/11/07 03:12 AM
OOO, I get to start the thread!! smile1 Yeah Henderson. He'll take care of her!!

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The last part of the song was playing as she put the car in park.


Would it help if I turned a sad song on
"All By Myself" would sure hit me hard now that you're gone
Or maybe unfold some old yellow lost love letters
It's gonna hurt bad before it gets better
But I'll never get over you by hidin' this way

I've never been the kind to ever let my feelings show
And I thought that bein' strong meant never losin' your self-control
But I'm just drunk enough to let go of my pain
To hell with my pride, let it fall like rain
From my eyes
Tonight I wanna cry


Lois sat for a moment to control the sobs that escaped her while she was immersed in the song. She could not allow Clark to see her this way…not after all she had done to him.
Great song for the fic and wonderful ending. Clark had better hear her crying and come out immeadiately or I'm going to be disapointed in him.

Loved it. Can't wait for more. laugh

Vonceil
Posted By: mervoparkite Re: FDK: Heaven 2/3 - 06/11/07 03:17 AM
Oh, BTW--If you mark your postings with the little blue arrow, it will make them much easier to find!!

Vonceil
Posted By: Sheila Re: FDK: Heaven 2/3 - 06/11/07 09:01 PM
Oooh..feedback! Me loves feedback!

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I posted a "real" feedback over on the fanfic board, but I just wanted to say again how much I'm enjoying this!

Thank you Vonceil and thank you for the blue arrow tip!

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Please don't get me wrong--She seems wonderful, but Clark is just supposed to be with Lois. I don't want him to suffer or be alone, but I have a hard time any time he appears to be going any other way. (even in stories that I love like Butterfly Legacy it's hard.) But, that isn't going to happen here
Girl you know I love Lois and Clark together more than any other FOLC! Don't worry!

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Great song for the fic and wonderful ending.
I love Keith Urban, especially that song!

Thank You, Vonceil. Part III will be up soon!

~Sheila
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