Interesting, Julie ... we have a very late Season 2 L&C, post WWW (where Lois gets rid of Scardino) but presumably before ATAI (where Jace Mazik blackmails Superman and Clark proposes), but obviously something very different has happened to make Lois this upset. Is it about Clark? Or something else? Must be something incredibly serious to make Lois even think she should throw herself in the river!

I was confused on why no one was in the newsroom on that day, though. You have Clark say that he knew he'd be needed since no one else would be likely to show up -- what in the world is going on? My first thought was another asteroid or something, but then Superman would be needed.

Hopefully you won't make us wait too long for the next part.

Kathy

Very intriguing, Julie! Poor Lois! She's so upset that she doesn't even want a kiss from Clark? That's bad! Mind you, she does get a hug. Lovely!!!


Wendy

These teaser segments are *way* too short. Still, it's progress -- we've got the time period nailed down now, and made it clear that the Very Bad News wasn't about Clark being dead or anything... However...! if you're going to post the whole story, please please do it in longer segments than this

PJ

Interesting, Julie. And, yeah, what they said - post more and lots of it. <g>

LabRat

The reason for the newsroom to be empty is in the first part of my story (Which I posted yesterday). I know I have some typos but generally I usually go over my work before I submit it anywhere so I guess I'd catch most of them. And yes, actually this is taking place after WWW, a few days or so later. (One of my favourite episodes )

Thanks for the feedback!

Ditto More!

I love your story, Julie. Very interesting, I'm definitely looking forward to seeing more.

And, since Wendy mentioned, have you found a BR yet? When can we expect more of your story? (Sorry, just impatient )

See ya,
AnnaBtG.

Very good Julie
but I'm with the others
longer segments
and more
merry