Yay! A new part, I'm glad to finally get some information about Lily's death. I cant wait for more, please write quickly .
Kate

Oh, and I have absolutely no time to read it now... But maybe I'll print it out and read it on my break tomorrow!

Daisy Mae, can you change the title to indicate that this is FDK for part 21?

wow Lois is back. Loved it. Get them back together and let Lois find them soon. Great part.

Can't wait for the next.

I, too, found it fascinating to be told about Lily's death. Was she and her parents murdered? Was Margaret Donovan somehow involved? And is that why she has been trying to take Becca away from Clark ever since then? If so, what will she do to Becca if she succeeds?

And I'd love to see Lois save Clark and Becca now! I hope that will happen in the next chapter, Barbara!

Ann

Hehe, wait and see

Thanks so much for the feedback girls.

Okay, I finally have time to leave feedback but not much... Sorry. It was a great part. I didn't see any words that seemed to be misused... Can't wait for more.