Yeah okay - still no witty title.

Loved it . I'm still not convinced that Lois Luthor is in this timeline and not in our Lois' timeline wondering why she's Lois Lane and not Luthor etc.

I'm glad she found Clark, but I hope the little minions don't realize it was her that was there when they attacked Clark.

Okay - I'd say more, but I need a nap. I had some of those lovely horrid pregnany dreams last night that kept me up [did Lori have any about Clark cheating on her with Marci or anything? Oh, wait, wrong fic .]

More soon please!
Carol

I've edited the header of your post to include the fact that this is a comments folder, Carol - but I'm a little confused as to which one it is. Do you mean Halloween 5?

LabRat

This one is for #5, I think. #4 is farther down.

Nan

See I told you I needed a nap....

Thanks Labby and sorry...

LOL. No problem - easy to fix.

LabRat

Now you have me curious where's Mrs. Luthor...

Jose

The more I read, the more I like this story & the more engrossed I am.

Lex Luthor freaks me out no matter what world he is in. Personally, I think he does his dirty work because he enjoys it.

I love the relationship you have between our Lois and their Clark. Somehow it is safer for them to share their real feelings because they're talking to a third party.

Excellent writing.

Elisabeth
who realized an easy sequel is writing the same story through the other Lois' eyes