OMG, I was praying that Becca didn't get caught. Then she could have run home and gotten help!

This chapter kept me on edge. I assume that these are Bureau 39 men who are searching for Clark's ship.

Both Clark and Becca are caught so now Clark will feel even more guilty because they had some unresolved emothions hanging between them. Maybe Lois will somehow come to their rescue and Becca will see that she really isn't all that bad.

Please, hurry back!

Hmmmm, Barbara, I can't say too many enthusiastic things about this chapter (you know about me and horrible A-plots). Ah, but this chapter does open up the possibility that Lois will become a heroine by saving Clark and Becca. Also, Becca can become a tiny heroine too, by encouraging Clark and helping him stay awake and fight his pain and weakness. Both Lois and Becca can become heroes here. If they work together to save Clark, this will be a great way to faroge a strong solidarity between Lois and Becca.

So, no, this is not my favorite chapter, Barbara, but it really does open up great possibilities!


Ann

Hi,

Great part! We need a heroine to save them maybe Lois is starting to get weary.


More ASAP, please.

MAF

oh great part but a bad cliffhanger. So come back and let us have a happy ending.

Hehe, yeah, I knew this would get me in trouble. I'm glad that you liked this part, though. Or half-liked it as in Ann's case.

Can't help it, I'm an A-plot addict

Great chapter!

Oh, no!

Andreia

Great part, Barbara. Sorry it took me so long to get to it. More feedback next time.

Come back soon!