Oh, You ARE good. You had me wondering the entire time if it was Clark or Lex talking.

Nice Job.

Me , too. Right until the end. Excellent, Paul,

But this is huge: Lex Lives!



c.

Ingenious!!

Fantastic, Paul!

I suspected that it was Lex from these lines:

but that didn't make it any less powerful.

That was the line that made me suspect it was Luthor, as well. But I still enjoyed the story, nonetheless. And I hadn't figured out who the kid was.

Altogether a good story. Very enjoyable.

Elisabeth

Oooh! that was excellent! Kept me guessing right up until the end, and - OMG! - I love stories like that!

Awesome story, Paul.

First I thought it was Luthor, then I thought it was Clark...and then I reached the end! Great, Paul!

I liked it, but then again, I like villains. There's something really appealing about seeing Luthor be that candid.

Thanks for the FDK, guys. Glad you enjoyed the story (or what there was of it, anyway). I appreciate you taking the time to let me know.

Eeeak! Paul! I thought I had left you fdk on this... but it appears not.

I definitely enjoyed this. You sorta kinda had me fooled - I kept thinking that it just had to be Luthor...

Nicely done. You have to do more like this one. <g> Of course I wouldn't complain if it was longer next time...

-- DJ

Hmmm. I was bouncing back and forth until the end. Thought it might be some alt-universe thing going on.

So many ideas, so little paper.

D8a's Muse.

Ooo, more FDK! Thanks!

Don't know about doing more, DJ, but glad you enjoyed this one enough to ask.

James, alt-U wasn't anywhere in my mind. I mean, yeah, Lex lived, but we've seen him die enough times to know it's never permanent. Otherwise, I just thought it was interesting to see how similar things can look from Clark and Lex's respective POVs.

Thanks for writing this!

I knew it would have to be Lex from the start actually. Though I am surprised that he knew that Superman was Clark Kent and so on.

Great story. My heart goes out to Lex.

The Little Tornado.

Well, Lex did know by the end of the series. This story takes place years after that. So it seemed only right that he would know at that point.

Glad you liked, though, and thanks for taking the time to let me know!

Paul