FDK: My Hero - 02/24/07 12:57 AM
You wrote something and didn't say anything? *gasp* I'm glad I peeked in here just at the right time, or I'd have missed it altogether!
I'm sitting here with a goofy smile on my face and and one of 'em WAFFs settled in my chest. What a very sweet story! I don't really have the energy for more detailed feedback right now, but I will say I got that warm, cuddly feeling of comfort from Jordan's thinking scene. "Hearing" Lois and Clark in the background like that was just... it was like you could (I could, rather, because I'm a dork like that ) feel the love and feeling of home all around. (And that didn't come across at all right, but like I said, it's late. *sigh*)
Yay for writing more! You should do it more often!
Sara (who's off to hit the hay now)
I'm sitting here with a goofy smile on my face and and one of 'em WAFFs settled in my chest. What a very sweet story! I don't really have the energy for more detailed feedback right now, but I will say I got that warm, cuddly feeling of comfort from Jordan's thinking scene. "Hearing" Lois and Clark in the background like that was just... it was like you could (I could, rather, because I'm a dork like that ) feel the love and feeling of home all around. (And that didn't come across at all right, but like I said, it's late. *sigh*)
Yay for writing more! You should do it more often!
Sara (who's off to hit the hay now)