Here's the feedback thread! Knock yourselves out.

"To be 'steamed' is to be annoyed?"

Lol, for some reason I never get tired of alien jokes like that. My favorite one was from Stargate SG-1, I think it went "Undomesticated Equines could not keep me away" or something to that effect.

Hehe . . . Yeah, Lara's got the formal speech down; she's just trying for the vernacular and the slang now.

Okay - I really shouldn't have started this - because I want to know what happens and if the last couple of parts are any indication it'll be a while .

More soon please .
Carol

Yeah, I'm kinda slow like that, when it comes to writing. But I WILL continue this fic! Thanks for the feedback!

That’s so funny (and so true) when you are trying to learn the slang of another language.

Can I suggest posting just a bit of the previous part with your posts to remind us of what was happening?

Nice part, Darcy.

Come to think of it, I think I had a re-cap at the beginning of chapter four. I thought I'd done the same thing with chapter five, but it looks like, what with my posting so late at night, I'd forgotten to do that. I'll put a re-cap at the top of the next chapter for sure.