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Posted By: Sheila FDK: Platonic 8/? - 02/03/07 11:33 PM
Oh, yeah, Sue...loved the quick turn around! hyper

Your writing is just absolutely fabulous! The tent scene is just so well wrtten as is the rest of the story. Finally, they are together...at least from one aspect and maybe they'll be together...in all aspects in the next chapter.

So hurry up with part 9!
Posted By: ChiefPam Re: FDK: Platonic 8/? - 02/04/07 06:26 AM
Ya know, when I first saw this was part "8/?" I wondered... seems like Sue already got them turned around and fixed up so how much more of the story can there be, and how can she still not *know*... but then I read this section and decided, the heck with it, you could keep this up for another 20 parts and I wouldn't complain. (Did I mention I'm fuzzy-headed due to a cold?)

This was so sweet. They're learning more about each other and getting more comfortable, and the sparks, they are a-flyin'. Hubba-hubba!

PJ
Posted By: Tank Re: FDK: Platonic 8/? - 02/04/07 08:27 AM
I don't know. This fic is really getting heavily into all that 'yucky-stuff'. But then, Clark can still screw it up. This is during his greatest lunkhead period.

Time for some death and destruction.

Tank (who had better go check on his meds after reading this instalment)
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