Well now, if no one is convinced that your English is getting better after reading this (which is all you an none of me nitpicking over grammatical errors) - then I'm going to have to put up billboards. *lol*

hehehehe! No... the man form the future - if he is who I think he is would never do that. Thinking about someone other than himself. AH! *lol*

Nice story - I think you did a great job with Dr. Klein. He's really much more interested in his research than he is in knowing what these guys want or why there's there or what's going to happen to him anyway. That's just exactly how I see him on the show and your characterization is just exactly like that. Well done!

What a great line. If I wasn’t aleady using one of your lines as part of my signature...


Jor-El? (But then he did say that in Foundling.)


ROFLOL!!

Sequel. Sequel.


Oh, Barbara that was just priceless!! (And you did all that without a beta? Bravo! Great English!)

Thanks, Lara, Nancy. You're making my day. I already thought that this was waaaay to stupid.

Now I'm intrigued! I want a continuation!

And I agree, your English is improving a lot.

Poor Klein. He doesn't get how evil these guys are and what their purpose is.

I liked it!

Your opening was so neat, I was totally drawn into it. Is there any more! I'm so interested in knowing what's going on. Please continue it!

Oh! Yes Please! More! MOre! MORE!!!!!
iit was fanastic...
great characterisation....

you really know the scientist... much more important to not stuff up the experiment! huh (and I've stuffed up a few... it is no fun writing "our experiment didnt work out... next time, I will make sure I turn the other way before sneezing on the DNA matching tests... especially the DNA tests on murder charges....If only i was a nuclear physisicist... they do all their work behind lead doors....) LOL it was never THAT bad,

but it is my worst nightmare if i were to do that...


your story was great, if you forgot in this LL attampt at a sentence that ends up rambling longer and longer, with no point to it at all whatsoever

Thanks for the nice feedback.

Oh, yeah! I want to see what happens: when Klein gets away from the bad guys, when he finishes the test, and most especially when he tells Superman about those little wiggly guys...

Really cute. But with Klein's bedside manner, I'm sure he could figure out some way to ask for more.

Elisabeth

A sequel? Of course! I want to see Superman bring Lois to Doctor Klein for confirmation that she is really pregnant!

Ann

Wow! Interesting idea, Ann. I'm gonna think about that one. So maybe there will be another sequel. I don't promise anything, though.

But you posted in the wrong folder, Ann. After all, Seeing Microscopes *has* a sequel

Wow! Interesting idea, Ann. I'm gonna think about that one. So maybe there will be another sequel. I don't promise anything, though.

But you posted in the wrong folder, Ann. After all, Seeing Microscopes *has* a sequel

Wow! Interesting idea, Ann. I'm gonna think about that one. So maybe there will be another sequel. I don't promise anything, though.

But you posted in the wrong folder, Ann. After all, Seeing Microscopes *has* a sequel

Wow! Interesting idea, Ann. I'm gonna think about that one. So maybe there will be another sequel. I don't promise anything, though.

But you posted in the wrong folder, Ann. After all, Seeing Microscopes *has* a sequel

Wow! Interesting idea, Ann. I'm gonna think about that one. So maybe there will be another sequel. I don't promise anything, though.

But you posted in the wrong folder, Ann. After all, Seeing Microscopes *has* a sequel

Stupid PC!