This is a different idea of how Lois and Clark might react if and when their secret was exposed. Actually, I like the approach. If they don't act like there's anything to apologize for, most people will think there isn't. Good job.
EDIT: oh wait never mind, I saw the thread titled Part IV: A Day At Work and assumed you were talking about Part IV. Looks like the thread should be titled Part V. (Part IV was "A Day at School")