Yay! Another continuation! I hope I actually remember to follow it this time.

Yeah, maybe you could I like readers, lots of them...

Perhaps someone might want to do a summary. I tried and though I was good in school at summarizing, I don't get it done now. Just in case anyone is interested in a summary anyway, of course!

mmm... only when I don't promise I'll look at your story and end up working on an nfic instead... sorries... it's all Lois' fault, she started begging and then, what was I supposed to do? Not let Clark go down to her room? I'm much to scared of Mad Dog Lane to do that to her! *lol*

I know I've told you a million times before, but I'm going to repeat so everyone knows. I *love* your A-plot. Love them! Totally!! There's anough clues for us to figure some things out that Lois and Clark don't understand, yet enough to keep us guessing as well. And to me, that makes the best stories. I like mysteries. And what I like above all is not being able to figure things out so quickly that it spoils the story - you, my friend, keep me guessing right up until the end every time and I just plain love that!!

Excellent part. (I miss Becca a little, though... hehehe!)

wow you can't leave us here. What a cliffhanger.

Love your story and I do the happy dance because there are new parts with Becca.

Hope Lois and Clark will find each other. Becca needs a mom.

I loved it and loved it and - suddenly it ended?!?

Not a cliffhanger again!!! I would have loved even more of it. Honestly.

Hi,

Great start!

Very nicely done. Don't keep us hanging on!

Wow, Barbara. That was such an ominous beginning, with young Martha and Jonathan Kent strolling down the streets of Smallville with their new little baby boy as all those ominous dark vans with darkened windshields come driving by. *shudder*

And Henry Meadows found those glowing stones, eh? Glowing green. Ugh.

Back in the present, I quite agree with Maria that I would like to see Clark suggesting to Lois that she could stay with him in his apartment!

And both Lois and Clark dismissed Jimmy's background research? They shouldn't. No doubt Jimmy had uncovered Henry Meadow's ties to Smallville, 1966, and Clark's arrival on the Earth.

And now a very, very unfriendly woman has come to see Clark. I'm sure she's up to no good...

Fascinating beginning, Barbara! And I have to tell you I love the title of your story.

Ann

Ah, but Clark's reading through Jimmy's research, so if there's something there, he'll find it, right?

I'm not sure I agree, let's see what the future brings. In fact I'm a bit afraid of the title and not only because "Serendipitous" is even more difficult to pronounce than "immediately". (It took us 45 minutes to wrap our tongue around that word. )

Hehehe! I bet you do! sorries... it's all Lois' fault, she started begging and then, what was I supposed to do? Not let Clark go down to her room? I'm much to scared of Mad Dog Lane to do that to her! *lol* </font><hr /></blockquote><font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">I agree with you Lara, you just couldn't let her wait for Clark. I wouldn't have wanted to wait either, if I was Lois.

Come on, Lara, you've already read the parts with her, so honestly, why do you complain, huh?

Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it. You made my day! Really! I'll be back as soon as I can.

I'm not complaining. And I will get to the next part *today*.

I just meant because... well.. there's no Becca in that part here. *sniffle*

Oh, come on, Barbara. I’m not sure this kind of story can be ‘wrapped’ up. It’s just all too sweet.

I love the titles you come up with. (And I wrote that before I read Ann's feedback. Hey, you could always try to prononce 'supercalafragilisticexpialadocious'!


I lost you here. Run-up? What do you mean?


Cute. The Smithsonian in Metropolis.


I know the feeling, Lois.


Oh, no! Not the social worker again. Or is that the principal?

Just gotten to this point (and enjoying the ride), so perhaps it will be resolved later on, but for now:
Clark is really dense. Must be all that dense molecular structure.

On a side note. Assuming that it's the apartment on Clinton Street, where is the extra bedroom? I never noticed on the show. Or was this poetic license in preparation for Lois slight pyrotechnic mishap?

Clark sweating: Hm, green K?

Michael