Nice transition with Clark thinking about Lois on the plane as Lois watches it move through the sky.

Beautiful.

Good stuff with Jimmy and Martha. I wonder why Lois was calling him?

It's gruesome, but I can't help but wonder about that muscle they removed from Clark. Will it grow back? In a human, I think that injury would be permanent.

This fic reminds me of Haunting Eden somehow, with the emotional rebuilding process.

Great part, but please put the toys back together soon.

Wonderful, sad part. Hoping to see Lois and Clark meet again soon. They need each other to heal.

Looking forward to the next part, as always!

Very moving part. I loved that Jimmy came over to support Clark.

Your story is great, Smirky Raven. Though I must admit that I'd like to have a bit of fluff soon. Please let him tell her, or let her find out...

Beautiful, beautiful part. The last few parts, in fact, have been lovely, and each is better than the one before. Take your time with writing, dear Raven. The proof is in the reading, and these parts have proven to be worth waiting for.