This is some funny stuff! Some of my favorite lines
More? Please?

A really intersting set up

And funny

Funny segment, Mary - my favourite bits have already been quoted.

One thing that struck me and which I'd failed to spot before was the reversal of Lois and Clark's situations - as shown by her nickname of City Boy for him.

However, speaking now not as a fellow writer but as an avid reader - more soon please!

LabRat

Mary

I've just read the first two parts.

I'm looking forward to reading the next part.

Tricia

Hi,

Great part.

Cute instalment. Some nice parallels and role reversals.

I could see that branch coming even if Clark didn't.

I have to assume that this Lois, if she dresses like a man, and plays hard, and works hard, like the men, she probably also has a short hair cut. It would be more practical given her employment as a ranch hand rather than a 'domestic' like Cat.

Tank (who thinks that the instalments could be just a teeny bit longer)

Mary
cute segment and funny
more
merry

I just read the first two parts.

I love this story, it's so ROTFLOLly!! Great idea

I'm not going to quote... there are too many good lines. But I enjoyed it very much, and I'm looking forward to more!

See ya,
AnnaBtG.