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Plot untwists are always fun. This one was hysterical!

LOL. Very cute. I especially enjoyed Jimmy's summary of Leslie's plans.

LabRat

Windfall

A great plot untwist!

I enjoyed it immensely.

Tricia

Hi,

Cute story.

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“You’re right, Jimmy. And I certainly don’t want to end up floating in the sewer, shot in the back. Would you tell everyone good-bye for me, and tell Lois I’ll always remember her fondly?”

“Sure Mr. Luckabee. Today’s only the first of the month. I’ll tell her the second…” Jimmy trailed off, waving pleasantly as Mr. Leslie Luckabee nodded gratefully, then hurried to his office to vacate. “…hell freezes over.” He shook his head in disgust and went back to work.

MAF
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Don't you owe me stories?

I have to point out a major flaw in characterization that took place in this little piece.

For this story to work as a plot untwist, we have to believe that Jimmy has the intelligence and competence to be able to decern Luckabee' motives and plans. Sorry, doesn't wash. Jimmy's most obivous talent is that he's clueless.

Tank (who doesn't understand the desire to portray Jimmy as something he's not... a useful human being)

Go! Jimmy Go! Woooo. I never really liked Leslie anyway.

:They need a smiley guy that flexes his muscles:

Samik

very funny
I enjoyed this
merry

Thank you all for your fdk, even if you didn't agree with the premise :rolleyes: .

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Don't you owe me stories?

I'm workin' on it, I promise

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LOL!

That was hillarius! Go Jimmy!

-Breanna Kay

Yaay for Jimmy Olsen.