Wow! I'm first. I'd better read this and then I'll be back!
Sue!
You have got to get back here and write the final chaper to this trilogy. I'm dying to know how Lois reacts to Superman's revelation. I think she's going to be thrilled!
Write on!
Anne
Wow! That was like teetering on the brink of a precipice. I was with Clark every daring, scary step of the way.
Yvonne
Sue, you rock!
You made my CRY, and it wasn't even a sad thing!
That takes some serious skills, gal.
Wow that was great! I loved it but there has to be more. Laura
Awwww! I wasn't even meaning to make anyone cry... yet. <heh>
Thanks guys for the encouragement. This is the second in a planned series of five. One of my favorite things on the show were all the moments he almost told her or she almost figured it out. I wanted to see them dancing on the edge for a bit.
Thanks!
Sue
"Just tell her. And then, if she's petty enough to be angry with you, fly back over here and tell me."
He stood and held his hand out to help her up. "I'll do that."
"Promise?" she asked
she hoped with all her heart *would* reject him.
Clark is dead. There is no way that he can tell her now without a Tank Ending Warning being needed!
I'm glad to hear that there will not be one, but three more parts! I love seeing them dance around the revelation/discovery, so I love your story.
But please, make do without a Tank ending, please! And give us some more interaction between a suspicious Lois and a Clark looking like the proverbial cat who ate the canary.
Oh, you so can't leave it there!
I hope you post the next story soon! This was so sweet and tense...
Hutch
Originally posted by Framework4:
Clark is dead. There is no way that he can tell her now without a Tank Ending Warning being needed!
No kidding!
But Sue will bring him back from the dead, right Sue?
Sue?
Artfully and wonderfully written. Beautiful story.
MORE!
I can't believe I totally forgot to read this. I read Proof when it first came out and I'm going to check if I left FDK.
Gee wiz. That was great. I loved the questioning back and forth and how you didn't just restrict it to a few and have him fly off.
Wow, jumping out of this post and on to the next part!