This is the feedback thread for Prologue and chapters 1-3 of the RE-WRITE of "A [Parent's] Love That Risks Nothing," which is called The Pitfalls and Pleasantries of Kryptonian Multiplication . I'm not sure if that's a working title or not, but it was fun to think up.

This is definitely true, Darcy, because in the New Krypton arc, Zara says that's the way of Kryptonians (meaning that they sometimes use telepathy). Since New Krypton has a red sun, then the color of the sun has nothing to do with telepathy.

So when do we get the next part?

I meant that there was reference in the story. And in some fics, the author tends to take away the telepathy when there's Kryptonite around, but I don't think that would happen.

Chapter four . . . isn't even started yet. It's still rollin' around in my head though, so there WILL be a chapter four. I just don't know when yet.

I wouldn't think it was taken away either as Zara made it clear that was a major way they communicated on New Krypton. And that's under a red sun where Kryptonians have no power.

Exactly my point. I'm glad you're enjoying the fic so far. I'll try to get my muse in gear and write Chapter Four soon.