Okay, I've decided to post this because it looked like we were having a slight drought in story instalments over the past couple of days. So, of course, when I log on to do so, I see several new story parts posted. I hesitated in posting, but then said 'what the heck'.

I've been off work for several days (there has been a real slow down in available work) but starting tomorrow it looks like things are going to pick back up. Actually, it looks like things are going to get crazy. Over the next eight weeks or more it appears that I'll be putting in some extra hours and weekend work on a fairly consistant basis. But that has nothing to do with you gentle readers I just wanted people to feel sorry for me.

This story is essentially done (thought some of the latter instalments still need to be proofed and tweaked before posting) so I plan to post a part every few days, depending on MY scheduled availability.

Any comments can go here...

Tank (who hopes that the gentle readers don't mind that I started with this follow-up rather than the one for To Protect and Serve)

Tank, the ending to this part was absolutely priceless!

This is certainly going to be a nice ride. Looking forward to it, but wondering if Lois feels more

Ok, I knew the tangled hair was doomed from the get-go.

Perry was a surprise, and so was Cat.

But the end, the end was . . . was . . .

Oh, and I am the only one wondering precisely how Cat happens to have this information?

Hi,

Great part.

You are a master of

Tank

An excellent start!

I'm completely hooked and I can't wait to see how Lois copes.

Tricia

My first thought ==>Holy Moley!!!!

Now, I'm ==>

I can't stop!!

More soon, before I collapse!

~Liz

Ooh! You're posting this, Tank! And what an intriguing beginning, too!

And then Clark is a pretty poor reporter - what on earth is she going to do with him?

You've set yourself a real challenge this time. But, in a way, I can't help wondering if it's just as well that this universe's Clark doesn't seem to match up to Lois's own; after all, she was married to Clark in her own universe, and she's still very much in love with her husband. So we couldn't possibly expect her to see another Clark and fall madly in love with him... even if her own husband did fall in love with her counterpart, after a lot of heartbreak.

Fascinating!! Can't wait until I have time to read more!


Wendy

Oh, boy did this strike a chord from a reader sweltering in the 'office' at home.

And, yay, another elseworld/alt universe - wonderful!

You just had to, didn't you? And that was very bad of you turning poor Jimmy into a woman! Aren't you ashamed of yourself? No, thought not.

Marvellous - inventive and original and just plain fun and intriguing. Keen to see what you do to the poor woman next. <g>

LabRat

Ohmylord. Poor poor poor Lois. I was curious when the red-head female said all the good-looking ones want Perry (not even catching that it was Jimmy! ohlord), and Cat's reaction to seeing Lois again. But the conversation over lunch takes the cake!

Oddly, I'm having a Sliders/L&C vision of Lois smacking a timer yelling "Hit zero! Hit zero!" I wouldn't be surprised if she does yell for Wells!

Loved it, Tank!!

The 'Future' series was always one of my favorites...

I'm so glad you've given Lois a new start... Nice haircut!

But then, after seeing what universe you've stuck her into...

Wonderful and hilarious start!! Can't wait to see what you do with it!!

Missy

great start Tank
I like your future series too
more soon please
merry

side again, Tank.

The hair cut was to be expected. And no doubt there isn't a good thing about this universe's Jimmy. But the changes to Perry and Cat? And then the last line. Gay??? Oh dear, poor Lois. It's hard enough to cope with all the other changes, but this will make her really shocked.

Looking forward to see how you continue this, Tank. Now post the next part, please.

Saskia