Yay!! another part of "After Midnight"

I love this story, and this part is as good as the other ones.

So... let's get to work <g>

Good work.

I love this paragraph:



But, btw, did you forget to mention who tried to shoot Lois??

Post more soon!!
AnnaBtG.

Loved the L&C interaction -- Clark tells Lois to stay put, Lois decides not to fight about it, he believes that she'll actually stay put, and then encounters her on site... very in character <g>

Gruesome description of the serial killers' victims -- thank you for not being any more descriptive. But there's gotta be a reason Superman doesn't hear anyone screaming... hmm...

And LOL at the ending -- I always knew Lois would end up in jail!

PJ

Interesting instalment. I was surprised at Lois' radical change in attitude regarding Clark.

It seems as if her anger has completely disappated. Granted she needs to focus more on her search for Lucy, but maybe she needs to acknowledge that somewhere in the story. That she has to put her anger aside, at least until they find out what happened to Lucy.

After that, let she can let him have it.

Of course, they aren't going to be able to find Lucy while in jail. If she is in the hands of that serial killer, how much time can she have left, if any.

Tank (who still thinks that Jimmy would be the best candidate as the serial killer)

Hi,

Great part.

This is an *evil* place to stop once again! Write more soon please, cuz I'm loving this story!

And the plot develops some more...

So Bill Church is involved, could be very nasty. But at least Jimmy is sort of innocent again.

The description of the murder's work is well done... /me shudders. I really wouldn't want to actually see those pictures.

Now write more and fast, Caroline. I want to know what happens to Lois and Clark in jail!

Saskia

HAR! Finally I remembered to get my comment in here so I can laugh at that. GREAT cliffhanger, and it's probably supposed to be evil or something, but it's just a really funny place to stop because they so had it coming. /me wonders if any of their expense accounts cover bail

Yay, Bill Church is involved. He's one of my favorites. I can't figure out **how** he's involved because he doesn't seem like the hair-clipping type...argh. You really are evil you know that.

More Soon!
Jen

Caroline

Another great part!

I can't wait to see what happens next.

Tricia

Caroline,
great part
very well done
more soon please
merry

Another great segment, Caroline - funny and tense by turns. I loved the little 'twist' of Church calling the cops on them rather than dealing with them himself in some nefarious fashion.



More!

LabRat