What do you think? This is my very first attempt at fan fiction. Constructive feedback is more than welcome.


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I think it is a great start!

Okay, this is good start and for the most part the story seems quite original, and I like the it, BUT the first paragraph sounds very familiar....

Looks promising! Can't wait to see how the storyline develops from here on in.

Is there another story that I am not aware of that has a similar premise? I don't want to copy anyone else's idea.

Nah, I think you're fine. It sounds a tiny little bit like something in one of my stories -- Lois & Clark's son seeks a meeting with Superman and asks himself whether there is any way of getting to see him without having to ask his parents to help.

But like I said, I think you're fine. No worries.

...and you have the beginnings of a very interesting story. I'm looking forward to the rest of it!

The very beginning reminded me of two of Lara's stories, but as you can see she is okay with your story. Carry on!

Very nice start! I too look forward to reading more! Looks like Lois and Clark will once again have to think about explaining things soon.

I always love reading how close LnC are to their kids!

Natascha