Good part...

A visit to Bobby Bigmouth soon?

Keep writing!

Jose

Hi,

Great part.


More ASAP, please.

MAF

I have very little time to quote, but I had to quote the lines above. I was so scared that either Lois or Clark would panic at the thought of possible incest and start avoiding the other one entirely, perhaps to the point where he or she would leave Metropolis. I'm so glad to see that to Lois, at least, such a proposition is unacceptable.

I love seeing them together in this part. I love seeing them relax once more in each other's company. I love seeing Clark standing up for Lois in front of Cat. I love seeing them using their superpowers together, being heroes together. I love seeing them pretending to be 'normal' together, taking a taxi together. I love seeing them taking on Luthor together. Luthor, on the other hand, gives me the willies. Scary A-plots and horrible villains scare me rather more than I like.

It's a good thing your muse decided that you would keep writing this for much longer than you had originally intended, because we get more of your lovely story that way.

Ann

Another great part!
Ann has perfectly said what I feel about this new chapter, I'm happy to see they're trying to be friends and partners, butI can't help hoping you'll solve this difficult situation and prove that they are not siblings!
There is a unusual note: I discovered Luthor has my tastes in music! La Traviata is one of my favourite operas! Don't tell me he loves Tosca and Madame Butterfly too!
I hope to read a new chapter very soon

simona

Still reading! So little time to analyze and comment, but I'm enjoying this story and looking forward to the next part!

Jen