Love it! I couldn't comment on your British-ism's but I like that name. That's definitely true, because what is a boffin??


What does Tentacles mean:

Am I just forgetting something from earlier in the story?


I loved Bill's tongue-tied reaction to Slayer Lois. I also liked her reaction.

And poor Bill doesn't know about his heritage. I can't wait to see what happens with the revelation from Clark.

Re: "Tentacles" -- as in Tentacled Alien Monster. Not that Bill actually HAS Tentacles but Spike has a pet name for pretty much everyone that he likes and a few enemies. (Niblet, Peaches, Soldier Boy ...) He knows Bill's an alien and he's going to razz him about it on general principles

Maybe I need another name ...

8! 8! 8! 8! 8! 8! 8! 8! 8! 8! 8! 8! 8! 8! 8! 8! 8! 8! 8! 8! 8! 8! 8! 8! 8! 8! 8! Too much? lol, You get the idea....... 8! 8! 8! 8! 8! 8! 8!

Well, Tentacles made me think octupus or big bug...

Anxiously awaiting the next part..

Loved this part.

One thing, I thought that vamps, in the buffyverse, could hear/feel the blood coursing through an individual. If so, Spike should have been able to pick up on Bill's change in blood pressure when he sees Lois.

James

I didn't like this...for the first half of the first chapter. Ignoring canon, making Lois a slayer, I didn't like it...until Clark showed up and I realized that it was actually an alternate universe. After that it grew on me quickly. I just found this story today and I like it!

As for the tentacled thing...I think that's a perfect spikism.

Looking forward to the next installment!