Hi,

Great part. Hey I want to see who the Kent’s will welcome Lois.


Get back here!


More ASAP, please.

MAF

Another great part. I'm very interested to see what may happen when they see the ship. If the Lois-as-Zara theory is correct, then perhaps the truth about being them related will be revealed by the ship...when both Lois and Clark happen to have their hands on specific places on the ship and a hologram appears.

Of course, that is only one theory. I can't wait to see the next part.

-Em

Janet, I have very little time to post FDK now that I'm back at work, but I loved this chapter as usual. I loved how Clark explained to Lois why she was not the kind of heroine that she thought she ought to be, and why he had done so much more than she had. I wasn't going to quote anything at all this time, but I can't resist this little snippet:
Poor Lois - she thought she was being Princess Elizabeth and now she thinks she's just been "the girl next door", eh?

I loved the way Clark reassured her. And I loved the way they worked out who Superman would be, and how Clark would answer questions about him. I loved seeing them back at work together, making the protection of his secret a joint venture between them. And I loved that unexpected bit of telepathy. Oh, and by the way, I just loved Clark's phrase for hacking into a system:


Also, I'd like to say that I appreciate the fact that Clark and Lois decide that Superman stands for "truth and justice" rather than "truth, justice and the American way". It's no big deal, and I wouldn't have objected if you had included "the American way", but I appreciate Clark's humility and his international approach to what he stands for.

I love Lois's fears of meeting Clark's parents, too. You really make me feel how unused Lois is to meeting people socially. And Clark means so much to her now that she would be very unhappy if his parents disliked her. Of course, I do expect they will love her, and poor lonely Lois really needs their support.

I love your story, and I'm relieved you didn't take offence at my earlier comments on Clark's reaction to incest.

Ann

I have a feeling I know where this is going next, it's going to be VERY interesting if I'm right. Greatly looking forward to more.

Oh, it is good to see you post again! This story is absolutely fascinating!

At the beginning I was hoping that Clark didn't have superpowers because I somehow felt there should only be one kryptonian on earth. However, that changed drastically. I really wish they are not related.

I am looking forward to the world's reaction to Superman and I am waiting for the globe to "speak" to Lois.

Natascha

Expecting that visit to Martha and Jonathan

Jose

Excellent, I love Clark's folks. :p

Jen