FDK: TLR: Belief and Sacrifice-Part 8 - 07/05/03 03:17 PM
Hi,
Great part.
Great part.
Re: FDK: TLR: Belief and Sacrifice-Part 8 - 07/05/03 03:42 PM
Aww.. it was sad... 
written beautifully
Meni
written beautifully
Meni
Re: FDK: TLR: Belief and Sacrifice-Part 8 - 07/05/03 06:13 PM
That's all I really had to say.
More soon.
Jen
Re: FDK: TLR: Belief and Sacrifice-Part 8 - 07/05/03 06:43 PM
Well it made me cry too. More soon. Laura
Re: FDK: TLR: Belief and Sacrifice-Part 8 - 07/05/03 07:57 PM
Oh *sob*
I cry every time I watch that episode. What made this bearable is that they are married and had a night in each others arms. I think that I like it better that way!
Great part Rac! Can't wait for more!
~Liz
I cry every time I watch that episode. What made this bearable is that they are married and had a night in each others arms. I think that I like it better that way!
Great part Rac! Can't wait for more!
~Liz
Re: FDK: TLR: Belief and Sacrifice-Part 8 - 07/06/03 04:42 AM
Ohhhhhhh, Rac. She whispers, awed, in a tremulous voice. This was so angsty, so poignant, so waffy...
...<sigh> so beautiful.
Brava!!
My heart was in my throat throughout the wedding and the wedding night (wonderful idea for them to go to Perry btw!) but this had the screen misting up most of all:
Just one small disappointment that I had was that you didn't change the setting for farewell to Superman. That scene in the show has always bugged me - I have no idea how no one figured out Clark was Superman with his parents there and his fiancee, grief-stricken, and those farewells, with the eyes of the world and several no doubt savvy reporters on them! I always felt that it would have been less dangerous to have done it in Smallville, separate from Superman's Planet announcement.
But no matter - it certainly didn't detract from my enjoyment of a beautiful, wonderful segment - more please, soon as you can, I'm loving this!
LabRat
...<sigh> so beautiful.
Brava!!
My heart was in my throat throughout the wedding and the wedding night (wonderful idea for them to go to Perry btw!) but this had the screen misting up most of all:
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"Do you hear it?" he asked breathlessly.
"I hear it," she whispered. "I hear it." Her heart ached and she thought it might burst with love for this man. Desire clawed at her; her blood was racing in her veins, her skin burning at every point of contact, her breath caught in her throat. She moaned into his mouth, feeling as though she might die of pleasure.
"I hear it," she whispered. "I hear it." Her heart ached and she thought it might burst with love for this man. Desire clawed at her; her blood was racing in her veins, her skin burning at every point of contact, her breath caught in her throat. She moaned into his mouth, feeling as though she might die of pleasure.
Just one small disappointment that I had was that you didn't change the setting for farewell to Superman. That scene in the show has always bugged me - I have no idea how no one figured out Clark was Superman with his parents there and his fiancee, grief-stricken, and those farewells, with the eyes of the world and several no doubt savvy reporters on them! I always felt that it would have been less dangerous to have done it in Smallville, separate from Superman's Planet announcement.
But no matter - it certainly didn't detract from my enjoyment of a beautiful, wonderful segment - more please, soon as you can, I'm loving this!
LabRat
Re: FDK: TLR: Belief and Sacrifice-Part 8 - 07/06/03 06:39 PM
Rac
WOW! This beautifully is written.
The wedding night is superb. Romantic, WAFFy, angsty! Just perfect!
I love this and can't wait to read the next part.
Tricia
WOW! This beautifully is written.
The wedding night is superb. Romantic, WAFFy, angsty! Just perfect!
I love this and can't wait to read the next part.
Tricia
Re: FDK: TLR: Belief and Sacrifice-Part 8 - 07/08/03 12:25 PM
Rac,
Loved the increased poignancy of that final scene once they're actually married! And I liked the humanity of Clark's flare of dislike at seeing Z&C.
Great to see Perry figuring things out, too.
I do admit I skipped over all the mushy stuff.
So give us MORE, soon!
Hazel
Loved the increased poignancy of that final scene once they're actually married! And I liked the humanity of Clark's flare of dislike at seeing Z&C.
Great to see Perry figuring things out, too.
I do admit I skipped over all the mushy stuff.
So give us MORE, soon!Hazel
Re: FDK: TLR: Belief and Sacrifice-Part 8 - 07/09/03 02:09 PM
Rac,
excellent part - beautifully done
sad
ditto others
more soon please
merry
excellent part - beautifully done
sad
ditto others
more soon please
merry
Re: FDK: TLR: Belief and Sacrifice-Part 8 - 07/16/03 04:50 PM
Thanks for your comments and your patience, everyone. Real life has been incredibly hectic lately and I apologize for the delay in responding, but hope the gentle readers will forgive me.
Thank you for your very kind words; I'm glad to see that this section worked, though I must admit it was pretty easy to write, given the good material the show provided. Rat, I totally agree that a Smallville fairwell would have been better. All I can say is, I wish I had thought of it!
Anyway, the last part of Belief and Sacrifice will be up very soon. I don't know when I'll start posting the next story, but I hope real life gives me a break soon so I can continue writing.
Rac
Thank you for your very kind words; I'm glad to see that this section worked, though I must admit it was pretty easy to write, given the good material the show provided. Rat, I totally agree that a Smallville fairwell would have been better. All I can say is, I wish I had thought of it!
Anyway, the last part of Belief and Sacrifice will be up very soon. I don't know when I'll start posting the next story, but I hope real life gives me a break soon so I can continue writing.
Rac