Hi,
Great part.
"Come in Zared. Most of Jenni's stuff is in the garage, but I... " He sat down. "Sit down, Zared."
Zared sat but could only think, "Oh, no."
Danny continued, "I couldn't finish with it. I just couldn't pack anything else."
Zared just raised an eyebrow, waiting...
Please tell me he let her stay until they get married.
Superman in the bachelor auction while still married to Lois is an interesting angle. I'd thought about that thinking it would make a great story, but I knew Lois would probably never have allowed it, but then again, it would make for a pretty funny story....
I actually have another draft where Clark *lets* Bernie walk in on purpose while he's kissing Caitlyn. I couldn't decide which one to go with. If you are interested, I'll post the alternate here with the feedback.
So, you liked my little teaser, eh?
Nancy
Hi,
Only 4 years! He didn't cry her very much.
No kissing it hurt my feelings!
MAF
Did you miss the part about him being so upset that he ended up spending a few days in a psychiatric hospital? Yeah, Clark was definitely upset! He considered suicide....
From part 9:
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She took her hand and wiped his tears. "It's okay. Were you married? Did she.. Are you a widower?"
He nodded. "If not for my children, I would have totally given up. I didn't want to live anymore. I even considered suicide. I was despondent. I was so depressed that I more or less shut down. I had to have professional help - and not as an outpatient. I spent a few days in the hospital." He just shook his head, "Like I said, if not for my kids..." .
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