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Great Job

FinLi

Ooh!

i told u that would make a good story see

So. Another death-of-Lois fic.

Ann

This was so well-written, and ultimately so, so heart-breaking.

And this, in particular:

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Reaching into his suit pocket, he pulled out two small rings. ... Staring at them, he knew they could never belong to another. He couldn’t keep them, he couldn’t sell them. It was all just too much to bear.

Ack! It just got me right *there.* Of course Clark can't keep them or sell them — he has to bury them with his wife, because her rings are such a raw, shattering reminder of what he's lost.

Thanks for sharing this amazing vignette on the boards.

Kelly

This is beautifully written. So sad!

Tricia

As I said yesterday...

Nice work, Kelly!

Very emotional piece.

See ya,
AnnaBtG.

*Blinks*

So beautiful, and sad. This part was really nice.

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Looking down at the rings she would never wear again, he walked over to the coffin and placed the rings on top. The words ‘until death do us part’ echoed in his head like a terrible song as he walked away.

She was worth more than that. She deserved forever and he wasn’t able to give it to her. Now she was gone.

He would never love again.

Very beautiful piece, kelly. I'm glad you enjoyed my video enough to make it into a fic.

Good Job!

Rach

Wow, Kelly!!

Ah thanks soooo much for all your wonderful comments. I am glad you all like the piece I wrote! I hope you all checked out the video as well by Rachel. Again thank you!

~Lois Lane Wanna Be