FDK: If I Were You (8/?) - 05/07/06 02:48 PM
Yay, they've missed each other! I'd bet it was not as much as I've been missing this story, though.
Yet another thoroughly engrossing chapter, Caroline. I loved Martha playing matchmaker. Heh. These two do need some two by fours swung at them sometimes, and I don't think there's a better person to do that than Mrs. Kent. I'm really liking the way you're having Lois come to realizations about how she feels about Clark, and I'm thoroughly amused by Clark in denial. Christmas cards! *bg*
My favourite segment was Lois' delayed attack of the nerves about Nightfall, though. The whole "she hadn't worried nearly enough" was such a precise and well-put statement.
There are many gems I could quote, but the line I'll probably remember best from this segment is:
Hee! Awesome.
Your story continues to hold me in its thrall. Can't wait to read more!
Yet another thoroughly engrossing chapter, Caroline. I loved Martha playing matchmaker. Heh. These two do need some two by fours swung at them sometimes, and I don't think there's a better person to do that than Mrs. Kent. I'm really liking the way you're having Lois come to realizations about how she feels about Clark, and I'm thoroughly amused by Clark in denial. Christmas cards! *bg*
My favourite segment was Lois' delayed attack of the nerves about Nightfall, though. The whole "she hadn't worried nearly enough" was such a precise and well-put statement.
There are many gems I could quote, but the line I'll probably remember best from this segment is:
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“Deflowered?” She giggled. “Did you go to high school in Victorian England?”
Your story continues to hold me in its thrall. Can't wait to read more!