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Posted By: IreneD Betrayal 1/1 Feedback - 04/09/06 07:18 PM
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Posted By: Terry Leatherwood Re: Betrayal 1/1 Feedback - 04/09/06 07:35 PM
I agree! That's really funny! I laughed out loud! And it's a very clever twist, too! Poor Clark can always find solace in his wife.

Unless she's working on the next Dalek invasion.

I like Doctor Who. I've liked that show ever since I first saw the Jon Pertwee episodes on the Dallas educational station back in the mid 80's. (They'd just bought the broadcast rights.) And I'm enjoying the latest incarnation on SciFi channel, courtesy of the BBC.

But I have to say that, as many weird things the Doctor has been through - including all those funky regenerations - is it possible to come up with original ideas for Who fiction? Are there any avenues which have not been explored? Is there any more typing balm left in Gilead?

Wait, what am I saying? With folks who can write cool stuff like this little vignette, the sky isn't anywhere near the limit!
Posted By: TOC Re: Betrayal 1/1 Feedback - 04/09/06 07:38 PM
I don't have much to say about Doctor Who, but Mary, this was priceless!!! rotflol rotflol lol

Ann
Posted By: Sheila Re: Betrayal 1/1 Feedback - 04/09/06 07:41 PM
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Posted By: Catherine Bruce Re: Betrayal 1/1 Feedback - 04/09/06 07:50 PM
O_o AT first I was so totally afraid that Lois was having an affair with St John... I even let out a cry of mortification!!

But then I'm not sure this is better... Wendy AND Julie BOTH writing Doctor Who fic? Oh woe! wink

Very cute! =D
Posted By: rivka Re: Betrayal 1/1 Feedback - 04/09/06 09:29 PM
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Posted By: Kent28 Re: Betrayal 1/1 Feedback - 04/09/06 09:35 PM
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Marcy
Posted By: tayryn Re: Betrayal 1/1 Feedback - 04/09/06 09:56 PM
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Tayryn
Posted By: TriciaW Re: Betrayal 1/1 Feedback - 04/10/06 02:42 AM
Mary

ROTFL!! smile1 Thanks for sharing.

Tricia cool
Posted By: Xanabee Re: Betrayal 1/1 Feedback - 04/10/06 06:11 AM
ROTFL! mecry

And Julie too? sad

Ursie
Posted By: LabRat Re: Betrayal 1/1 Feedback - 04/10/06 12:37 PM
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Poor, poor Clark. I really don't know how Wendy can be so mean to the poor boy. laugh

LabRat smile
Posted By: KathyM Re: Betrayal 1/1 Feedback - 04/10/06 12:59 PM
Mary, this was a lot of fun! I didn't see the twist coming either.

And we need to get Wendy - and Julie - to stop torturing the poor boy and get back here pronto! I don't want Dr. Who to feel neglected, however - even though I know nothing about him, we don't want him to feel the pain and anguish that poor Clark is experiencing right now, do we. Maybe Wendy and Julie would be willing to split their time 50/50...

Kathy
Posted By: Simona Re: Betrayal 1/1 Feedback - 04/10/06 03:20 PM
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Posted By: Capes Re: Betrayal 1/1 Feedback - 04/10/06 03:43 PM
Wow, I almost choked on my water at the end. I knew there'd be some twist--that it couldn't be Lois leaving--but what a twist!

Good for you for outing those two vagabonds!!
Posted By: ChriscyK Re: Betrayal 1/1 Feedback - 04/10/06 04:19 PM
lol Great job! lol
Posted By: MaraElaineKent Re: Betrayal 1/1 Feedback - 04/10/06 09:36 PM
VERY funny! I loved it! goofy
Posted By: lovetvfan Re: Betrayal 1/1 Feedback - 04/11/06 01:41 AM
*Doubles over in laughter* This was just BRILLIANT! I wondered when you said 'he' was English and then when you said Doctor Who I nearly spit out my drink all over my keyboard wink

SO FUNNY!

(And there's nothing wrong with a little Who fic...nothing at all...)
Posted By: Dave Re: Betrayal 1/1 Feedback - 04/11/06 04:59 PM
ROFL! rotflol

Oh man. I haven't laughed so hard in... <g>
Posted By: Julie S Re: Betrayal 1/1 Feedback - 04/11/06 07:12 PM
...You just had to shame us in public, huh? <g>

I have to say, though, "Julie is writing it too" is not a valid defense for Wendy since it's her fault in the first place. <g>

Julie rotflol
Posted By: Ank. K. S. Re: Betrayal 1/1 Feedback - 04/11/06 11:13 PM
wohoo!!!
Posted By: Queen of the Capes Re: Betrayal 1/1 Feedback - 04/12/06 12:13 PM
Wow...Lotsa feedback! eek

Thanks, everybody! goofy
Posted By: Anna B. the Greek Re: Betrayal 1/1 Feedback - 04/14/06 01:33 PM
Bwahahaha! I didn't see that one coming.

Lots of fun! rotflol rotflol rotflol

See ya,
AnnaBtG. lol
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