There seem to be some parties (you know who you are) who were disappointed by the WHAM-level of StGTTWE. So, to placate the gentle readers, and by popular demand... I wrote a TE of sorts for Alicia's wonderful story.

Thanks to Alicia for letting me, and BRing it. Thanks to Hazel for the suggested addition.

Tomatoes and other projectiles here.

Rivka, I LOLed at the 'Fortunately... Unfortunately... Fortunately... routine. Very funny!

Cute!

Irene

Rivka,

Totally and utterly evil... All the horrible aspects all over again!!! ARGH, Deter, and Tempus!

Much better.

Tank (who wonders how all these other people can be commenting on a post that says it's for Tank's eyes only???????)

EVIL! Trying to make the evil-in-training shortlist are you?! A ha! To quote Matchbox Twenty, "You have been found out!" But it's 12:38am, and I'm rambling nwo. Way to bring all of my favorite love-to-hate villians in there.

Jen

nice TE, rivka. irene already pointed out my favorite part, but it was well done, overall.

and hey, it's not all evil... you killed tempus!

oh, and nice avatar.

since it'll change in this thread if you change it again, i'll preserve it here so everyone can marvel at the amazing TE avatar.



Paul

Great job Rivka!!! )

Very clever TE, Rivka. You managed to get in many of the villains (and yay!! Tempus died!), but what about Mxyzpltk? <g> (I sort of like him A lot )

And that para with the "unfortunately, fortunately..." GREAT! So funny.

So when can we see more from you?

Saskia

Hazel was right! And just in case I wasn't hooked enough...

I think I'm in trouble...

I'm so glad y'all approve. And you liked my favorite paragraph too!

Was it not clear that I killed off Deter as well?

And Tank... wow, Tank thought this was
Oooh!

/me whispers: Hey Alicia, I think they liked it. What are we going to come up with as an encore?!

Nice job Rivka
merry

Rivka

ROTFL!

Thanks for sharing this great Tank ending.

Tricia

Rivka,

You already know I think this was really funny!

Yay, my first story that I BR'd... okay, it was a Tank Ending... Okay it was for my own story... but it still counts .

I hope everyone listened to my warning about reading the real ending first . Personally, I really don't like death or A-plots, so I sort of hesitanted because I didn't want people to associate my story with the TE. I sort of wanted the story to stand by itself, but I also liked Rivka's idea for the TE . I sort of wonder how many people knew that I didn't write this TE as they read it (other than the people Rivka told/showed on IRC).


And, yes, Rivka, you *do* have to write more.

- Alicia
I know I should be sleeping, but it is only 1am.

Rivka,



Jana (who must've somehow used Tank's eyes to read this, because she was able to read it after all)