Great part. Please come back soon.

I really liked the conversation between Jonathan and Lois and Clark and Martha. Great style. Hope they'll find their way.

Hi,

Great part. Love Jonathan and Martha conversations.


More ASAP, please.

MAF

Yes! I agree that it was great the way you were sort of "cross-cutting" (like a movie) between the conversations between Martha and Clark, and Lois and Jonathan! It worked just beautifully! It was actually much like the way Lois and Clark sometimes finish off each other's sentences, which I have always found so charming. And the two threads of conversation shed so much light on each other, and on Lois and Clark, and on the similarities between Lois and Martha, and on the Jonathan/Martha and Lois/Clark relationships, and... well, it was just great!

The story is really heating up. I love the way it is going. But... hmmm. Okay, after I wrote my Valentine story and found how difficult, and indeed embarrassing, it really is to try to write about lovemaking (even couched in words that can be expressed in the PG folder) I promised not to nag other writers to include love scenes in their stories. But, seeing where this is going.... Well, I guess that if you are not going to include even the tiniest little hint that Lois and Clark are doing anything more than being asleep in bed together, I guess I'm going to be just a little bit disappointed!

Ann

Oh...I'm so glad to see that you posted again so soon. This was such an emotional display of our favorite couple's feelings. The story is wrapping up nicely and I am anxious to read the next part!

Kelly

A great part!

Tricia

Ah you comments have been fantastic! Thank you sooo much! I am glad you all liked the Jonathan Martha Clark Lois talk. It was fun to do and making sure that the lines made sense was tricky but worth it.

Ann it's really interesting you mention that because there is a part that I am including that yes involves something along the line of a bed and other things . Right now it's an n-fic piece but hopefully I can work on PGing it so all can enjoy because it really is a nice scene despite the more adult content of it.

This now leads me into the bad news part. I can't finish posting this story at this time. I know I said I would but hey who am I to argue with the real world. It's been a rough couple weeks and I won't be able to post the last two parts and the n-fic scene until May or June. It's not something I want to do but I figure it's for the best. Trust me, when I do come back, it will be one hell of a comeback beileve me

Hope you all enjoyed what you read so far and I'll be posting again in May. Thank you folcs!

~Lois Lane Wanna Be

Oh, well... What can I say?

Okay, we've got a deal. But you promised to come back, don't forget it, Miss!

where is part 9?

Still no part 9?

wow powerful and exciting more plz lol

Still waiting for part 9.

I have been around but I am just waiting on some BRing is all. I hope to have it up within the next two weeks so keep your eyes opened

~Lois Lane Wanna Be

Thank you, I was hoping that you'd finish this story. I loved it and I like to have a happy ending.

Hellooooo...

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This is for anyone who wants to catch up, start reading, whatever. The story is done! It just went to my BR's so it's whenever they get it back to me, I'll post again. (no pressure guys )

There is actually three parts left to post and an n-fic part so if you are under 17 and have been reading this piece, sorry, this one is for the adults

Thanks for all the encourgement and for not sending too many after me

To those Folcs in the USA: enjoy the Thanksgiving holiday!

~Lois Lane Wanna Be (who is listing to Christmas music a little too early )

oh I can't wait. I love this story nuts. Will read it again on Friday and then I am waiting in the corner for the last parts.