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Posted By: lovesuper97 FDK What is true? part two - 01/31/06 10:08 PM
Wow loislane the story is getting better by the minute i was like S@#$% i can't wait until you put it in the achives.
Posted By: groobie Re: FDK What is true? part two - 01/31/06 10:57 PM
Cliffhanger! It was nice of Clark to reveal his secret to Lois rather than just leaving her in her tears, but that means he's not around to control her reaction. What will her emotional state drive her to do? What's going to go through her head now that she knows the truth? I'll be looking for part 3 to find out! cool Susan
Posted By: Nicole S Re: FDK What is true? part two - 02/01/06 02:07 AM
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... before I go I'll change...
eek Saaaweeeeeeeeeet revelation!!! thumbsup Unique and QUITE enjoyable!!

So much emotion packed in here. MORE SOON PLEASE!!

~NICOLE smile
Posted By: TOC Re: FDK What is true? part two - 02/01/06 09:17 AM
Like Nicole said.... What a revelation! Wow! Unique, that's right. Has Clark ever revealed his secret to Lois this way before? Don't think so, and yet it seems like such an obvious thing to do. To prove beyond a doubt why he has to go when he has to go, that it's never because he is running away from her, and that he really trusts her. Way to go, Clark, and don't blow your top now, Lois...

Yes, let's see more of your story soon, please, Kelly!

Ann
Posted By: Sheila Re: FDK What is true? part two - 02/01/06 08:23 PM
Oh no you did not just leave us hanging here! That was cruel and this is a great story. My God, that letter had me needing kleenex. It was so sweet. I'm so glad that Clark told Lois the truth before he lost his nerves. This makes for an exciting next part. cat
Posted By: TriciaW Re: FDK What is true? part two - 02/02/06 02:35 AM
Kelly

I've just read the first two parts of this. smile

Lois's letter is beautifully written. smile1

Tricia cool
Posted By: SuperRoo Re: FDK What is true? part two - 02/04/06 03:47 PM
I get my new computer and then bam my huband's ten year old monitor decides to die. I went through the beginnings of a horrible LnC withdrawl.

I just got a new one this afternoon (old and refurbished was all I could afford - whoa $94 plus tx smile ) and I quickly zoomed here and found this awesome little puppy.


WHAT CLIFFHANGER! GET BACK HERE!

party
Posted By: LoisLaneWannaBe Re: FDK What is true? part two - 02/06/06 08:48 PM
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Wow loislane the story is getting better by the minute i was like S@#$% i can't wait until you put it in the achives.
Thanks lovesuper, sometimes writing this felt like S@#$% but it is nice to see that in a possitive contex smile

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Cliffhanger! It was nice of Clark to reveal his secret to Lois rather than just leaving her in her tears, but that means he's not around to control her reaction.
Ah what will it drive a woman in love to do? laugh

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Saaaweeeeeeeeeet revelation!!! Unique and QUITE enjoyable!!
Thanks Nicole! smile

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Oh no you did not just leave us hanging here! That was cruel and this is a great story. My God, that letter had me needing kleenex.
Thank you so much! Sorry I got ya choked up but I am glad to hear you are liking it smile

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Like Nicole said.... What a revelation! Wow! Unique, that's right. Has Clark ever revealed his secret to Lois this way before? Don't think so, and yet it seems like such an obvious thing to do. To prove beyond a doubt why he has to go when he has to go, that it's never because he is running away from her, and that he really trusts her.
I am glad Ann you enjoyed it. Actually I really don't know if Clark in other stories has told Lois like this before. I think I wrote it this way because I was always upset he never just said it and he always let everything else get in the way. Ah love, but hey it makes for a great story wink

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Lois and Clark's emotions are superbly portrayed. I love the revelation. So spontaneous and original!
Thats soooo awesome to hear! Thank you for reading! smile

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WHAT CLIFFHANGER! GET BACK HERE!
No problem Roo, off to post part three now before the mob comes after me wink

Again thanks for the comments and for those who read and don't comment, I know you are there and thank you smile

~Lois Lane Wanna Be
Posted By: mariadferdez. Re: FDK What is true? part two - 03/02/06 12:41 PM
Hi,

Great part. notworthy

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“Leave and see what happens Kent.” Lois growled. She had gone from touched to angry in about four seconds flat.

“Lois I have to but before I go, I’ll change.” Clark suddenly started to spin around and around until he was no longer dressed like Clark He was dressed exactly like…

“Superman? Clark…oh my God!”
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More ASAP, please.

MAF :hyper
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