FDK: Inside A Newlywed's Mind - 09/29/23 12:56 PM
Let me know what you think.
Re: FDK: Inside A Newlywed's Mind - 09/29/23 07:23 PM
Funny interaction
Quickies....
Quickies....
Re: FDK: Inside A Newlywed's Mind - 09/29/23 07:28 PM
Hi Barbara,
I have not read it yet. Am just stopping by after leaving other FDK where I just happened to have mentioned Inside Out
See you later in this thread. Need to finish the other chapter first.
Michael
I have not read it yet. Am just stopping by after leaving other FDK where I just happened to have mentioned Inside Out
See you later in this thread. Need to finish the other chapter first.
Michael
Re: FDK: Inside A Newlywed's Mind - 09/30/23 04:48 AM
Haha, very fun! I think Horny needs to make an appearance as a head character - because clearly he's the one overseeing the entire operation. Keep'em coming! (No puns intended at all, btw.)
Re: FDK: Inside A Newlywed's Mind - 09/30/23 06:18 PM
Originally Posted by Deadly Chakram
Haha, very fun! I think Horny needs to make an appearance as a head character - because clearly he's the one overseeing the entire operation. Keep'em coming! (No puns intended at all, btw.)
If there was a pun intended this would have to be on the dark side of the boards. Glad you liked this.
Originally Posted by Blueowl
Funny interaction
Quickies....
Quickies....
Hehe, yeah the team's got their hands full.
Re: FDK: Inside A Newlywed's Mind - 09/30/23 06:21 PM
Love it!
Re: FDK: Inside A Newlywed's Mind - 09/30/23 07:49 PM
OMG, brilliant!
Re: FDK: Inside A Newlywed's Mind - 10/04/23 05:53 AM
This was such a totally fun romp through the spectrum of Clark's basic emotions!
Laughed out loud at this! 
Clever detail!
STEAMY! And really fun how the bit keeps going over the next couple of lines.
Loved how urgent this felt within the confines of an elevator, and the upcoming floor! What a great setting for this!
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"Oh, boy, can't we be a damn man about it and press that f***** button?"
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"...that's the reason Lois and Clark never made it to Hawaii."
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"Hey, how was I to know that 'Slow' would mean-"
STEAMY! And really fun how the bit keeps going over the next couple of lines. Loved how urgent this felt within the confines of an elevator, and the upcoming floor! What a great setting for this!
Re: FDK: Inside A Newlywed's Mind - 10/04/23 03:34 PM
Thank you very much for your feedback, Jaded Evie. You made my day.
Re: FDK: Inside A Newlywed's Mind - 10/04/23 04:33 PM
I love these and I get it, if I was in Lois's mind I'd be thinking about the same thing around Clarkie. Great job.
Re: FDK: Inside A Newlywed's Mind - 10/05/23 06:19 PM
Hi Barbara!
They had two weeks in bed!
LOIS: Your point being…?
They could “investigate” an abandoned warehouse?
Wonderful. A new type of fear emerges. Fear of missing out on nookie!
FEAR: It’s a real thing!
Yes, that would be embarrassing. Also, now I’m flashing to Ultra Woman and if Lois left female imprints, indicating weight issues as the trope-based issue.
Anger seems to be feeling quite a bit of leftover UST.
It’s three seconds!
CLARK:
So adorable!
This was very yummy (sic)!
Michael
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very intense, albeit much too short, honeymoon.
LOIS: Your point being…?
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Neither Lois nor Clark were yet ready to step out into the newsroom and spend a whole day as a professional reporting team when they’d rather continue where they’d left off this morning in their bedroom.
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”Boys, we need to do something,” Fear whispered. “The elevator doors are going to open in five…four…three…two…”
FEAR: It’s a real thing!
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”Well, I’m trying to push Clark’s feet against the bottom of the elevator,” Sadness grumbled. “But the flight mode is a bit sluggish when Lois is kissing Clark like that.”
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”But the button is for emergencies,” Fear squealed.
Disgust grinned. “This sort of counts as an emergency, don’t you think?”
Disgust grinned. “This sort of counts as an emergency, don’t you think?”
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. “We really don’t want feet shaped imprints on the elevator floor.”
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”Oh, boy, can’t we be a damn man about it and press that f***** button?” Anger’s hand shot toward the controls, but four emotions held him back.
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let’s not forget to check the manual for the Kryptonian definition of a ‘quickie.’”
It’s three seconds!
CLARK:
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Fear shrunk a bit as four pairs of eyes suddenly fixed on him. “Hey, how was I to know that ‘Slow’ would mean-“
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Clark is already fumbling for words when he needs to be Superman and this is waaaay more embarrassing.”
Disgust buried his face in his hands. “Oh, do tell!”
Disgust buried his face in his hands. “Oh, do tell!”
This was very yummy (sic)!
Michael
Re: FDK: Inside A Newlywed's Mind - 11/12/23 02:12 AM
Oh my goodness! I startled the cats laughing out loud. This was brilliant!