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Posted By: Queen of the Capes FDK: Just Another Day At the Park - 07/21/23 04:13 AM
Story is Here .

Series ToC is Here.


The challenge:
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Kerth Challenge #7: Love Declaration

Choose a love declaration from a movie or T.V. show and have Lois or Clark use it in their admission for how they feel about one another. The more out there the better!


Hope yall enjoy. smile
Posted By: PuffyTiger Re: FDK: Just Another Day At the Park - 07/21/23 04:56 AM
mecry
sloppy

notworthy
Posted By: bakasi Re: FDK: Just Another Day At the Park - 07/21/23 07:24 AM
Oh, another part in the series. Well done. I could use a little help with the movies, because I doubt I've seen a single one in the original language. Hubby prefers action movies over chick flicks, I'm afraid. lol
Puffy, Glad you liked it! ^_^

Bakasi, the movie quote was from one of the Star Wars films:

Leia: I love you.

Han: I know.
Posted By: bakasi Re: FDK: Just Another Day At the Park - 07/21/23 04:33 PM
Oh, that's embarrassing. I even did see that movie in English.
Originally Posted by bakasi
Oh, that's embarrassing. I even did see that movie in English.
Don't feel bad; it was subtle. ^_^
Posted By: SuperBek Re: FDK: Just Another Day At the Park - 07/21/23 06:19 PM
whinging

Oh, this was just...so well done. And so whinging

Thank you for sharing!

-Bek
Posted By: Blueowl Re: FDK: Just Another Day At the Park - 07/21/23 10:31 PM
So sad.... I really hope Clark recovers!!!! cry
Posted By: Morgana Re: FDK: Just Another Day At the Park - 07/22/23 11:44 AM
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"I'll take having pieces of you over having none of you any day of the week!" She lowered herself into the chair next to his. "I love you."

Clark is working hard to try and put these pieces together. This series is heartbreaking, yet oh, so well done! mecry hail
Thanks guys! <3 ^_^
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK: Just Another Day At the Park - 07/30/23 07:42 AM
Hi Mary!

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A/N: Warning – Angst
Huh. How bad must the angst be to deserve a warning. /Checks author/ oh because it’s not comedy, there’s a disclaimer required. Although…

LOIS: What do you mean, my pining over Cla- erm Superman is funny? Because it’s NOT! Also, I do not pine over Superman. And there is no reason to talk about Clark. Why did you bring Clark into this?

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“Push me on the swing!”
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Clark looked around, bewildered. “Uh…where are your parents?”
Yep. He’s gonna end up with a 300ft restraining order and mandatory visits to all his neighbors.

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His wife appeared from somewhere just behind him, holding a squirming baby in her arms. “Right here.” She freed a hand to rest on Clark’s shoulder and sat down beside him. Her name dangled on the far side of a vast chasm. “Jenna's ours.”
Eeeeep! Is that an entry in the existing amnesiverse or a new one? Also, he has trouble holding on to new information, too?

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The girl’s heartbroken look nearly destroyed him. “You forgot me again?”
Oh boy.

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His wife reached for the girl and tugged her closer. …Lois! His wife’s name was Lois. Clark seized that fragment of memory and held it as tightly as he could.
Awwwwwwww… he needs to get a tattoo with the pertinent information.

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Clark blinked. He was in Centennial Park again, though he wasn’t sure why. The playground his children loved was several yards away and completely empty.

A man smirked at him. “You’re going down, Kent!”
I’m thinking sports.

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“Clark? Clark, it’s okay. This is Barry Allen. He’s a friend. You play sports together.”
See? Also laugh

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“Wait, what? We were just talking a few seconds ago!”
Oops?

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Yes, I’m Barry, and all you need to remember is that I just beat you twelve-to-one.”
rotflol

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”Yeah, I think so. Um…what are we playing?”
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She was crying. “Just shut up! I can’t lose him again! Do you understand that?! Just crawl back into your cave and leave us the **** alone!!!”
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His concrete island was surrounded by a sea of grass, deserted except for himself, a distraught Lois, and someone in a strange, black costume.
Oh.
CATWOMAN: Forget it. He can’t even remember that he wants me, so how can he help someone else remember their wife?
BATMAN: You’re a villain. How is my not loving you related to me helping Clark? Also, stop following me around like a lost kitten!

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His hand found the small notebook in his pocket. It held everything his brain could not. “It’s…it’s front page stuff,” he remembered.
Awwwww

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The stranger immediately pulled her out of the way of Clark’s jerking limbs.
Oh boy.

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The article waxed poetic about a noble hero who was tragically killed in action in the depths of outer space.
Sounds like Amnesiverse!

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”I know.” He brought their hands to his chest and smiled at her. “I remember it in here, just fine.”
Awwwwwww

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I love you.

I know.
You sneak! Also, given the rest, the “I know” is much more powerful.

Thanks for giving us another entry clap

wave Michael
Originally Posted by Darth Michael
Hi Mary!

Hi Darth! wave

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Huh. How bad must the angst be to deserve a warning. /Checks author/ oh because it’s not comedy, there’s a disclaimer required.
Yeah, pretty much. The worst-tasting coffee is the one you thought was tea until you sipped it.

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Also, he has trouble holding on to new information, too?
Like Lois said back in Scraps: "I never know what's sticking". ^.^

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Awwwwwwww… he needs to get a tattoo with the pertinent information.
XD Should he go full-blown Memento? wink


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You sneak!
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Also, given the rest, the “I know” is much more powerful.

Thank You!! That's exactly what I was trying for! smile

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Thanks for giving us another entry clap

wave Michael

And thank YOU for the FDK! I always look forward to your commentaries. laugh
Posted By: KSaraSara Re: FDK: Just Another Day At the Park - 08/03/23 08:57 PM
GAHHH this series just breaks my heart in the best way… whinging

Sara smile
Originally Posted by KSaraSara
GAHHH this series just breaks my heart in the best way… whinging

Sara smile

sloppy ^__^
Posted By: Framework4 Re: FDK: Just Another Day At the Park - 08/14/23 06:26 AM
Well done
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK: Just Another Day At the Park - 08/14/23 08:20 AM
Hi Mary!

Just realized I missed an FDK-FDK blush
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Yeah, pretty much. The worst-tasting coffee is the one you thought was tea until you sipped it.
laugh Of course, Now I’m thinking that the coffee’s also so thin that it actually looks like tea (without milk).

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Should he go full-blown Memento?
Huh. /checks google. Finds Wikipedia – Wow, there’s an online version of the Encyclopedia Britannica? How cool is that? / okay. I get it now. evil

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And thank YOU for the FDK! I always look forward to your commentaries
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wave Michael
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