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Posted By: TOC FDK: Prequel (2/2): Terms of Endearment - 01/23/06 11:10 AM
This is so sweet and lovely. Clark is feeling so extremely low. He hears that it is Lois who is coming, but
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if not for her whispered, fervent plea, he wouldn't have answered.
But from this nadir, things soon turn very sweet. These two people are meant to be so very close. And just look at this:
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Lois looked down at her shoes, unable to meet the intensity, the unexpected intimacy of his stare.
The intimacy - yes, indeed. When Lois tells him that she will never reveal his secret he is so relieved - not because he ever thought she would do that, but because he feared she was bringing him bad news about their relationship. When that is not the case, Clark starts touching her:
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he gently placed his hands on Lois' shoulders.
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He reached out and cradled her cheek in his hand.
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A tear slipped down Lois' cheek, and Clark tenderly brushed it away with his thumb.
And now Lois responds:

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But she could only nod before she stepped forward, wrapping her arms around Clark's neck.

He pulled her closer.
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"I trust you," Clark whispered fiercely, his lips close to her ear.
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Lois was trembling. She closed her eyes and rested her forehead against his collarbone, still gripping his shoulders.
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He placed a kiss on the top of her head.
Well, that was about as far as we got between Lois and Clark here, intimacy-wise. But really, it was so sweet, and it was just a prequel! I'm looking forward to a lot more love and WAFFiness in you upcoming story!

Ann
Posted By: L Re: FDK: Prequel (2/2): Terms of Endearment - 01/23/06 12:06 PM
Your story flows so lyrically. I really enjoy your writing style and your plot development.

Excellent story, and now I look forward to 'endearment'.
Posted By: Sheila Re: FDK: Prequel (2/2): Terms of Endearment - 01/23/06 08:01 PM
I'm enjoying where this is going. Keep it coming. cat
Posted By: Xanabee Re: FDK: Prequel (2/2): Terms of Endearment - 01/25/06 04:58 AM
Thank you, Ann, I couldn't give better FDK! You already said it all. clap

Lovely and poignant and WAFFy. Keep posting, Editor!

Ursie
Hi,

Sound interesting! thumbsup
First off, Ann, you completely spoil me with such in-depth FDK! Thank you so much -- and you're right, I think we're venturing into WAFFy territory. Maybe my Lois and Clark deserve it, after getting through "Estrangement" (relatively) unscathed!

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Your story flows so lyrically. I really enjoy your writing style and your plot development.
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Lovely and poignant and WAFFy.
Thank you so much, L and Ursie! The compliments I've gotten on my writing have just left me stunned!

And, Sheila and Maria, don't worry -- I'll keep posting. smile Thank you all for reading, and for your comments!
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