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So now they know Clark is being targeted.... thoughts?

Part 4: Trauma

Yikes! Poor Clark!! But also poor Lois!!! Imagine how scared she was, knowing what was happening to Clark

So glad she was able to shake him out of it!

Clark was real quick to redirect them away from getting him seen by a doctor

Great chapter!! Looking forward to the next one!!

-Bek

Nice! I'm loving seeing how this works without Lois knowing the secret! I hope she finds out eventually, though

Aaand for part four

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Whoa,” Clark whispered as the elevator went down.

He couldn’t wait to share what he had learned with Lois.

More intrigue!

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Clark had been targeted. Someone she knew, just like Star had said. Someone she . . . loved.

How could this be happening?!

/Clears throat and adopts Southern accent/ Well, darlin', when a reporter cares very much for her partner, she starts to develop these feelings…

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Lois frowned but gave in. “I guess you’re right, but please, if you feel anything again, tell me.”

“Okay,” Clark agreed as they stood up.

“Alright. Let’s find out who’s doing this so we can stop them,” Lois stated, firmly taking Clark’s hand.

O o O o O

Aaand we’re in deep into the investigation. Though Clark instead of Lois getting involved with the story must be a first

It’s a captivating tale you’re weaving!

Michael

Ahhh! What Ailujecarg said! I love watching this unfold pre-revelation and pre-relationship!

Sara

SuperBek - Yeah, it was a good thing Lois was there, as for the doctor, nobody has time for that! :P

Ailujecarg - I had fun writing it ^_^ Poor Lois.

Darth Michael - A first for everything

KSaraSara - Admittedly, the pre-relationship bit is a little hard to write, as I'm having to think back to early season 2. I hope I juggle it write

Thanks everyone. Next part will be up shortly.

The panic attack was well done. I liked how the connection between the attacks on the others and the attacks on Clark became a little clearer. Thanks for sharing

Originally Posted by bakasi

The panic attack was well done. I liked how the connection between the attacks on the others and the attacks on Clark became a little clearer. Thanks for sharing

Thanks. I had been tempted to have the attack occur AT the Planet but that would have been overly complicated and I doubt Perry would have let Clark get away with not being seen by a doctor....