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GAHHHHHHHH!!!! I’m not sure I can say much more than that!! Excellent “episode”! So many feelings. And that kiss!! GAHH!!!

Sara

I will echo Sara's GAHHHHHHH!

LOVE it!! Poor Lois, feeling so guilty, and poor Houdini, also feeling so guilty!

And just...Clark, being so Clark...making the best out of the situation. So happy they get to go to the corn festival!!

Can't wait for next week already!!!

Thank you for sharing!

-Bek

Glad they're going to maje the best of it!

Can't wait for the festival. And I hope as he recovers they'll figure out how to stabilize his powers.

Is it next Friday yet?

Yay! Corn festival!
Poor Houdini

Glad Clark could cheer them both up.
Can't wait until next Friday!

Thanks for another terrific chapter! Clark comforting both Lois and Houdini was sweet. The kiss melted my heart. I’m glad they’re going to the Corn Festival. I hope next Friday gets here fast! I love this universe!

I'm afraid next Friday won't be here any sooner than the last one.

I'm so glad you liked this installment. Initially, Houdini wasn't a part of this story. But when so many people wrote that he would be so confused after the events of the last part, I realized that I needed to include him. Unsurprisingly, the story turned out to be so much better.

Thanks so much for your feedback.

Hi Barbara!

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I almost forgot about the poor dog this week

Eeep! You need to walk him regularly or you find all sorts of surprises in your home. And black cars with darkened windows in front of your building.

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. A whimper left his throat whenever he stopped and looked up as if contemplating whether to jump up and open the door.

Aww…poor guy understands he got no thumbs.

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But she was also scared of his reaction now that he’d had time to think. His declaration of love had taken her by surprise. How could he really mean it after everything that had happened?

Nah. That’s not the problem. Her visiting him in his room and getting ready for bed. That might confuse him, though.

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while Clark had given him a brief account of what had happened.

“I told Lois that I love her and that must have spooked her because she dug up the green crystals and came at me with them. Then, when I started to curl up in pain, she sicced Houdini at me.”

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Lois had wanted to help, but all she’d been able to do was watch, feeling completelycompletely helpless.

She really needs to learn how to tend to a wounded Superman. It’s a future skill.

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How could she ever look into the Kent’s Kent’s eyes again after what she’d done to him?

Hey, at least she’s not telling them that Clark got her pregnant she’s now looking for him.

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Now he was resting in his room and she still had no idea if he was feeling better.

She could climb in and hold him.

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Actually, she wished someone would yell at her. She knew she deserved it.

Maybe she needs a hug, too?

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"Sorry, buddy, I didn't mean it that way," Clark said. "Of course, you're not a problem. Come here."

Awwwww

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“Because once I’m back to normal, I’m not sure I will dare to do this…” He trailed off, a flicker of hesitation in his gaze. Then he swallowed and leaned in.

His kiss was gentle.

Awwwwwww

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. Lois wished she wouldn’t have to stop kissing him.
Ever.
But eventually, they had to part. He leaned his forehead against hers, a heavy sigh escaping his lips.
“Sorry about that,” he whispered.
She cupped his cheek and stroked it with her thumb. “Why do you say that?

You did mention a Kerth kiss, didn’t you?

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Please don’t stop kissing me. Let’s make the most of this disaster.”

Yep. I wasn’t going to say it before, but yep, this is the perfect opportunity to christen that bed of his.

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He reached out to brush a strand of hair behind her ear and ran his fingers along her cheek in a gentle caress. “With you, I’m up to anything.”

Awwwwwww!

So, next part’s magic is gonna be particularly corny?

Michael

I'm gonna go with Sara here. GHAAAA! The feels! Such a great job on this! I don't know what made you decide to learn to write in English, but I'm so, so, incredibly grateful you did! Love all your stuff =)

Originally Posted by PuffyTiger

I don't know what made you decide to learn to write in English, but I'm so, so, incredibly grateful you did!

Hehe! It's not like I had much choice about learning English. You can't go to school and decide not to learn English. It's required. But I have much more fun writing fanfic than I ever had in English classes.

Anyway, thank you so much for the kind words. You're making my day. So glad you like these fics.

Originally Posted by DarthMichael

So, next part’s magic is gonna be particularly corny?

It just might be...

So glad Houdini was there! The poor dog felt terrible about hurting his humans. Nice to see Jonathan in the story has well, lending his quiet capableness.

The kiss was ….

Now, onto the corn festival!

Thank you, Morgana. It's awesome to still get feedback for this fic even after so many weeks. I believe this is one of my favorite parts. Glad you liked it.

At the risk of repeating myself, another excellent story. You’ve shown you excel in describing the entire gamut of emotions. Brava.