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Posted By: bakasi FDK: Late Encounter - 03/18/23 12:08 PM
Here is my reply to Kerth Challenge #1.

Let me know what you think?
Posted By: Blueowl Re: FDK: Late Encounter - 03/18/23 02:30 PM
Holy cow!!!
I wonder how that would have changed things!
Are you going to continue this? I hope so....

Really liked this ^_^
Posted By: Queen of the Capes Re: FDK: Late Encounter - 03/19/23 03:02 AM
...Nope. No. Uh uh. You do not get to end this here. This is *not* a place for a stopping point. Part Two please. Now. :p
Posted By: Songbird Re: FDK: Late Encounter - 03/19/23 06:39 AM
I agree with Blueowl and Queen of the Capes, more please!
You can’t leave it here! I love this! Thanks!
Posted By: Morgana Re: FDK: Late Encounter - 03/19/23 04:11 PM
(Morgana jumping up and down). Come back here please finish this! grovel
Posted By: bakasi Re: FDK: Late Encounter - 03/20/23 04:20 PM
Thank you all very much for your feedback. I forwarded your request for a sequel to my muse. Now, I await her reply.
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK: Late Encounter - 03/24/23 04:46 PM
Hi Barbara!
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This was an interesting lesson in finding less wordy synonyms.
LOIS: What do mean ‘I won’t qualify '? I can most certainly keep it short and concise. I’m a reporter, I need to aim for fixed column inches. Stop laughing, I do not have an uncontrollable urge to express myself verbally!

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He always seemed to know when she left work.
NIGEL: The next time Mr. Luthor takes Ms. Lane to the opera, we need to replace her tracker’s battery.

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Though it was unnerving, he was probably just eager to spend time with her.
No, he’s not controlling.

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Would Lex’ kisses be as mind-blowing as Clark’s?
Yes, she’d want to blow his brains out.

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Maybe Lex was even going to be her happy ever after.
Does she like gilded cages?

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She approached him. “What are you doing in that alley?”
He’s drunk and had to pre-empt an airborne accident.

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He narrowed his eyes on her. "Are you reverting to blackmail now? Love me or I'll marry your enemy?"
Ouch!

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"Your enemy?" she croaked. "What is it between you and Lex?"
A woman came between them.
LOIS: shock
JUSTITIA: wave

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"If you want to help, find out who was behind this. You might be surprised." He pursed his lips and then, with a look of sheer concentration, he managed to lift off. Suddenly, Lois was alone with her thoughts.
LOIS: so… Bill Church and Intergang?

Thanks for that little reminder how the time flies by smile1

/mutters about Kerth challenges/

wave Michael
Posted By: KSaraSara Re: FDK: Late Encounter - 03/30/23 01:00 PM
Ack!!!! OMG this was awesome! The tension was great! And I wonder…in the sequel…will Lois realize that Superman was curt and fighting with her just like Clark had been??

More, please!

Sara smile
Posted By: Toomi8 Re: FDK: Late Encounter - 11/18/23 07:01 PM
Super late to this party! I’m glad part two is up as that’s an intriguing way to leave things hanging! Nice twist on the episode.
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