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Posted By: ChiefPam FDK: Hearts United, 15/16 - 12/13/05 02:43 PM
We're almost done... of course, there are still a few loose ends to be tidied up... wink

PJ
Posted By: groobie Re: FDK: Hearts United, 15/16 - 12/13/05 03:28 PM
Another great part!

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The ladies led him over to the other door out of the office, which led into the backstage area of the theater, chatting about colors and fabrics. He reminded himself that he trusted Lois. And these ladies were their friends. How bad could it be?
Ha, ha...with women on the case, tight spandex is sure to follow! Who wants to look at his face, anyway? laugh

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The gun fired. Gwen felt herself pushed backwards and down to the dusty floor. Looking at her chest she saw that blood was beginning to stain her white blouse.
Wow...I didn't expect that ending! Now I feel a little bit sorry for Gwen. At least she didn't reveal his secret.

Looking forward to the conclusion!
Susan
Posted By: mariadferdez. Re: FDK: Hearts United, 15/16 - 12/13/05 03:45 PM
Hi,

Great part. thumbsup I like the idea of Clark be a descendant.


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The gun fired. Gwen felt herself pushed backwards and down to the dusty floor. Looking at her chest she saw that blood was beginning to stain her white blouse. That would never wash out. With some difficulty, she realized that it wouldn't matter.

The world around her was blurring. Trask was speaking again, but she couldn't make out the words. The arrogant bastard had just doomed the whole planet. At least he wouldn't survive her for long. Her head dropped down to the floor again, landing with a crack she barely felt. The world went dark.
hyper You read my mind. One less!


More ASAP, please.

MAF hyper
Posted By: Nan Re: FDK: Hearts United, 15/16 - 12/13/05 06:20 PM
I could have told you that was going to happen to Gwen. You don't threaten psychopaths like Trask and get away with it.

Okay now, let's deal with Nightfall and introduce the new superman -- ah, Windfall. <g>

Nan
Posted By: daneel Re: FDK: Hearts United, 15/16 - 12/14/05 09:05 AM
Expecting last part now that Dr. Porter is out of the game... smile

Jose smile1
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