Hi,

Great part.

More ASAP, please.

MAF

I'm saving the cell phone as a plot device for later, so I didn't want to bring it up right now. Besides, Lois Lane is a stubborn sort; she would never think of asking for help unless *absolutely* necessary.

Unfortunately, Karen's in a panic; and Lois is drowning in airbag fabric. After they hit, she [sneak preview] loses consciousness.

Hi,

What's your posting schedule?

MAF

I'd like to finish this up by mid-December. So I expect to post each evening, either two normal chapters per post, or one long one (10-15KB).

I know that's a lot for people to read; but the Season's getting on, and I'd like to get it out of the way before the new year.

Nice Part. Wow I knew something suspicios was going to happen, but I would have never guessed this. Good Job More ASAP.

In regards to your posting schedule that is quite a lot, but I am sure we as readers and keep up. If not I know for me anyway that there is always Christmas break to catch up!

Hi,

I just knew that wheel wobble was going to cause trouble, but I hadn't dreamt of a rockslide.

Apart from a cell phone, Lois has a little 'guardian angel' in the car, though I'm wondering if she'd be strong enough to dig her way out.

Looking forward to the next chapters.

Yours Jenni

Hi,

Where are you?

MAF

Sorry; I'm in the Mountain Time Zone. Tonight's post (Monday) didn't make it to the board until nearly 8:30pm MST. I'll try to be more prompt from now on. Mea culpa.