FDK: How It All Started - 11/18/05 11:10 AM
What an interesting premise!
Loved that line.
The Cliff's Notes version was
Good job!
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Silent, that is, of artificial sounds.
The Cliff's Notes version was
Good job!
Re: FDK: How It All Started - 11/18/05 02:10 PM
Hi,
I'm shock!
I'm shock!
Re: FDK: How It All Started - 11/18/05 05:10 PM
Ha-ha!! That was fun. I hadn't read such a nicely bad-written (this is supposed to be a compliment) story in a while 
Thanks for the dedication!
Some hysterical lines in there. The first paragraph (the one you had posted on the challenge folder) is pure addiction. Other favourites include the short Physics lesson 'light is faster than sound', the description of the field with the crater, the clicking, and Martha and Jonathan being overcome by a sudden urge to flap And that's not everything
All in all, an amusing piece (at least for those with this kind of sense of humour).
See ya,
AnnaBtG.
That was fun. I hadn't read such a nicely bad-written (this is supposed to be a compliment) story in a while Thanks for the dedication!Some hysterical lines in there. The first paragraph (the one you had posted on the challenge folder) is pure addiction. Other favourites include the short Physics lesson 'light is faster than sound', the description of the field with the crater, the clicking, and Martha and Jonathan being overcome by a sudden urge to flap
And that's not everything All in all, an amusing piece (at least for those with this kind of sense of humour).
See ya,
AnnaBtG.
Re: FDK: How It All Started - 11/18/05 05:38 PM
flash, crash, love it!
SO funny, such a cool idea, writing something in babble mode. I get overwhelmed just reading it.
Very in character too. I could hear her voice narrating this lovely tale!
NICOLE~
SO funny, such a cool idea, writing something in babble mode. I get overwhelmed just reading it.
Very in character too. I could hear her voice narrating this lovely tale!
NICOLE~
Re: FDK: How It All Started - 11/18/05 08:09 PM
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The Cliff's Notes version was
Great job!
Re: FDK: How It All Started - 11/19/05 12:57 AM
Even more hysterical than just the first paragraph! Wow, that was some BAD fan fiction! And again, I must cry for poor, poor New Jersey (both western and eastern). 
Ode to New Jersey:
It was a dark and stormy night in western New Jersey. It was just dark in eastern New Jersey, where the ocean stormed with jealousy at its California cousin. Western New Jersey was also storming with jealousy, because while it was the western part of New Jersey, it was not the western part of the United States. That would be California, which was bright and not stormy, because it rarely stormed in California. At least, it rarely stormed in Southern California. It did sometimes storm in Northern California. Northern California was not jealous of Southern California, because while it rarely stormed in Southern California, it was also rarely clear because of the persistant layer of smog. Northern California, having less poluting industry, had less smog, and therefore had more clear nights. Except when it stormed. But it was not a dark and stormy night in Northern California. It was dark and stormy in New Jersey (western, not eastern).
Susan
Ode to New Jersey:
It was a dark and stormy night in western New Jersey. It was just dark in eastern New Jersey, where the ocean stormed with jealousy at its California cousin. Western New Jersey was also storming with jealousy, because while it was the western part of New Jersey, it was not the western part of the United States. That would be California, which was bright and not stormy, because it rarely stormed in California. At least, it rarely stormed in Southern California. It did sometimes storm in Northern California. Northern California was not jealous of Southern California, because while it rarely stormed in Southern California, it was also rarely clear because of the persistant layer of smog. Northern California, having less poluting industry, had less smog, and therefore had more clear nights. Except when it stormed. But it was not a dark and stormy night in Northern California. It was dark and stormy in New Jersey (western, not eastern).
Susan
Re: FDK: How It All Started - 11/19/05 01:22 AM
This was SO funny! Good job!
Re: FDK: How It All Started - 11/20/05 02:52 PM
Loved the elderly truck, the youngish couple and the dark, stormy night... in New Jersey!
Hilarious!
Hilarious!