Yay!!

I'm curious how are going to handle this in a world where Superman is a comic character

Jose

*thud* You've posted! And a wonderful start it is! Yes, names are important.. he's not going with Kal King, is he? Can't wait to see the rest of this.

Great to see you writng again, Pam, and this is off to very pleasant start Maybe too pleasant? The lull before the storm?

I notice Kal still has some of those patriarchal Kryptonian values - will that cause trouble down the road, I wonder.

Liked very much the bit about the unique bond that Kal feels with Lois.
And great to see the reappearnce of Brenda and Francine - got such a kick out of them in HD. Hope they cause a bit of mayhem.

Karen wrote:

What about Kal Kong? I mean, able to leap tall buildings....

Looking forward to the rest of your story.

c

Another of my fav authors continueing a good story!

Looking 4ward 2 reading this.

James

ARGHHHHHH! Cruel, cruel woman!

I should know better than to check the board just before I leave . . . I have no time to read it now!

*wanders off, muttering about evil people who post story parts so early in the day*



*returns*

Excellent! Well worth the wait. Starting off with a bang (several, actually)!

Um, since I had to wait all day to read part one, you aren't going to also make me wait a long time for part two, right?

Right?

Twinnie? *puppy eyes*

Woohoo!! You're posting this at last!

And this first section is so much fun! There's all the discussion of what Kal likes to eat, his traditional habits, the concubine discussion, the return of 'sexist creep'... So... what nsaty, evil things are in store for them?


Wendy

I loved "Hearts divided" and I'm ready for another great story! Thank you for posting it, Pam!

simona

It was everything I remembered the earlier story to be.

Looking forward to more soon. Like maybe, tomorrow...


James

Oh, look, it's Hearts Untied...Sorry, couldn't help myself

Still killing me with the Poptarts and Mac 'n Cheese quote.

Still love that waterfall, too. The more I read it, the better I like it.

Hi,

Great start.

Okay; this is a unique setup: A world where Superman is a comic book character is about to get its own Superman. I wonder how many people will be snooping around the Daily Planet looking for Clark Kent ...

Nan

Well I know what name thye will pick anyway<g> Cute idea. Laura

It's nice to see another story by Pam on the boards again.

The original obviously screamed for a sequel and, surprise!, here it is.

Looking forward to the twists that the unique setting is going to cause while trying to bring a comic book character to life.

Tank (who thinks that, at least with the history of the comic books, Superman will have a leg up on people accepting him)

Yes! This is awesome! I can't wait to see how Kal and Lois manage to make a comic book character reality.

I love the originality of this and HD. Perry being a colonel, Lois a lieutenant and now a private investigator, and Clark (now Kal!) not even growing up on Earth - it's just so creative! I bow to your greatness. I look forward to the next 19 posts!

Jen

OMG! Yay! You posted!!!

ROTFL!!

Oooh, yay, the girls are back!!!

Great first post, Pam. I love how Kal and Lois are close and comfortable with each other - even though she says in the begining that his presence will take some getting used to. And yay, they're getting married. (unless you'll be evil and give them trouble first, that is <g>)

Julie

Yay, another Pam story!

A wonderful start!

I looking forward to reading more. I thoroughly enjoyed this.

Tricia

I haven't read 'Hearts Divided' in a while but I really enjoyed the story and I loved the opening and the interaction between Lois and Kal and also how he wants to marry her. More soon please!

I'm so pleased you guys like this -- I hope I can hold your interest!

Jose, I'm curious about that myself

Err... no Honestly, that one never even occurred to me... but it's pretty funny now that you mention it, Karen

Carol, you're a wise woman. And that's all I'm sayin'.

Kal Kong?

lol, Rachel. Glad you like the pop-tarts -- and the waterfall. I wasn't really sure how that would go over... and thanks for all your help beta-reading this story!

Maria, I used "old partners" to refer to their work to bring down Nor. And Lois runs a private investigation agency now -- did I not make that plain? Eek...

That is an excellent question.

Probably quite a few... of course, they won't find anything there... Glad you're reading, Nan.

Don't be so sure And thanks!

Me neither! I hope they're coming up with some *really* good ideas...

Thanks, Jen. I like playing with universes.

Thanks, Julie <g> I couldn't really write them as being too awkward with each other, not after all they've been through.

Would I do that?

Thanks, Tricia And I figured that if I tried to write a sequel without Brenda and Francine, I'd get lynched... I didn't really need them, plot-wise, the way I did in the last story, but I like 'em, and they can be very useful on occasion!

Thanks, Crazy Babe. Congrats on your soccer team!

And now, I suppose I should post the next part, which should answer a few of the above questions...

PJ