Absolutely liked it!

You had me dreading for a while that Lois was not alive or something crazy like that when the kids were with Martha and only Clark was mentioned...

Hmmm, threat on the kids? Who do you have in mind? Intergang or someone new?

Awaiting next post...

Sarah

A great start!

I can't wait to see what happens. Who is after Lois and Clark?

Tricia

Good start

Curious about the bad guys

Jose

Nice start! I also thought maybe Lois and Clark were dead. Nice to see they aren't. Go Emily! Get that Nathan kid!

Jackie

A little bully on the path of redemption? Quite a way to start a puppy love, with a black eye!
I like how you get Emily's struggle with her blossoming powers, very well written!

simona

Interesting...but only three parts? I feel almost cheated. This could be fun for a long ride.

Well, keep up the good work. I like the bits about the problems the developing abilities are causing, and the developing romance...er...antipathy, between the bully and the super-hero.

I'd start naming the things I like about this story, but I'll take the shortcut and say I like everything about it! It's great!

Looking forward to the next parts!
See ya,
AnnaBtG.

Hi,

Great start.

This is a brilliant story. I'm rally looking forward to some more.

But only three parts?

Keep on writing,

SNL

Ooh, interesting, Sarah! I'm not normally a fan of nextgen stories, but I liked this. You've written Emily's struggles coping with superpowers so vividly. It's not all fun and games, is it?

Clark's so sweet in this, too. And I'll be fascinated to see what you do with Nathan, who doesn't seem to be quite so nasty after all...?


Wendy

Thanks for your comments, everybody!

Well, it was only 3 parts. I've tried to flesh out the "bad guy" storyline just a bit, so I think now it's going to be 4 parts. But I don't intend to turn it into a long story, it's suited best to being something short and quick, I think.

Yes, Lois and Clark, Martha and Jonathan are all alive. I'm not the type to kill off anybody in either of my favorite pairs!

And now, I hope you're ready for Part 2! Recently revised, so hopefully I haven't edited in any typos.

Thanks again for reading!