For all of you who are still with me, I'm flattered. Thanks Poussin, Yvonne, Laura, Sheila, Nan, Maria, James and Andreia and Ankit.

Let me know what you think!

Angst! Hurry back! This story is great and you have the amazing ability to kep the mountain...umh...cliff hangers going. Where is Clark? Shouldn't he arrive just in time?

Hi,

Great part.

We are still here Shayne. Wow she just got out of that one, but where to? I am looking forward to hearing more about Clark also. Hopefully a little B plot will come up as well. Laura

Ack!

Tell Clark to hurry and come back!

Nan

Ack, close call there, Lois!

Great part!
JD

Terrific!!

~Ankit

You definitely have a gift for writing action scenes with suspense. I'm dying to know what will happen next.

I hope everything's okay for Clark at the fire. Maybe he's in trouble, too. And I definitely hope that he will be back in time to save Lois.

And I agree with Laura, I hope for a little B-Plot before the end.

Great story. I love it. Keep it that way, and please: more soon.

Angst I didn't see any angst.

Now, suspense/tension, definitely.

Yes, I must agree, couldn't have said it better myself.

James

People sure know what to get Lois for gifts. Very practical.

Someone needs to wrap a SWK for her so she can always be prepared...or maybe they should wrap The Boy Scout for her.

Please post soon and get Lois out of this predicament.

gerry

Shayne!

This is great stuff. I always enjoy your writing with L&C. I especially like the way you write how Clark seems to be slowing down time when he does his "Super" stuff. This story has become very suspenseful too. So, let's get on with it. Can you start posting every other day or so???? Huh???? No??? Hummm, I could always hope. :rolleyes:

Well, write on!
Anne